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Ummm wtf is this? It seems extremely incomplete. Like you didn't even leave off to a proper cliffhanger. Who asks their 18 yr old who he would live with if mommy & daddy gets a divorce? Who cares he's 18 his ass shouldn't even be living at home lols. The mom is annoying I hate needy, spiteful & catty chicks. How you get mad cause the father & son are bonding, grow up bitch lols. If I was him I'll live with dad, two bachelors. I hope the next chapter is better.
boring
BORING!
not "erotica"
Belongs in the non-erotic section
my apologies
the whole thing didnt post for some reason so i am resubmitting now.
a good start
a nice layout for the beginning of a story. the characters so far well defined and uncomplicated with a simple plot. hopefully there will be continuances with some complicated twists to keep us interested.
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