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A Perfect Disguise

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by PrevertOne01/29/13

For Once A Genuine Monster

Amidst all the vampires and succubi and other life-sucking monsters on this site, it's good to see something original....and genuinely scary. Keep up the good work :)

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by Gorkon01/30/13

Wow!

This is the most original, catch you off guard story I have read in a couple years here! Until the end, I was thinking vampire or succubus. Excellent excellent.

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by Anonymous01/31/13

Well Done!

Something different for sure. You write well, too. Keep it up. Tired of the same old vampire/werewolf crap we're flooded with.

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by jonmartin2202/04/13

awesome!

really nice twist on the succubus thing!

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by Anonymous02/09/13

Officer Smith and Lt Shaw?

Will Smith and Shia cameo? o.O

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