All Comments on 'Haven Ch. 01'

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John BlackhawkJohn Blackhawkabout 11 years ago
interesting potiential

its a good start to a story, i'd love to see how it plays out

trashmantxtrashmantxabout 11 years ago
Good so far

relax nobody knows..It took me a long time to post a first story also.

As it turns out I suck at punctation and trusted 'word' to much

Hope to see more of this story soon, the sex isn't so important as the story as far as I'm concerned 5*

EdwarusEdwarusabout 11 years ago
Potential

Good so far lookin foward to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good start

I for one am ready for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice start!

Looking forward to the next installment ;-)

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfabout 11 years ago
promising

Love what I have read so far can't wait for next installment.

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