Do You Like to Watch?

A good start!

A most entertaining little story from a promising new writer. Well done, thank you and four stars. I hope you will like being a writer here and please write more for us!

Nice!

Eh

A joke of a story by a joke of a writer.

Too early to evaluate

I don't get this dumping on a new female writer, who stated upfront this is new to her. I see it as a chance to watch someone evolve and to discourage that is banal. I gave it a 4 so at least we may get that chance.

I liked it.

Hope to see more from you! :) 4 from me!

This is extremely sensual, and I love her thoughts on being ogled vs being watched. I predict lots of sexy adventures for these two. Write on!

She Should Punish Him...

by stepping out of the shower and switching the water temperature past COLD to FUCKING FREEZING! Then let him stay there, beneath the water, until he's learned his lesson.

I checked out the author's personal website. It's kinda weird, but also pretty sexy. If you like blogs from intelligent dominant women, give it a try!

And great start

I love stories written from the female's perspective. I loved the way she let us see what made her tick and how she portrayed herself as dominant and vulnerable at the same time.

Loved your story

What a great story! You built tension and excitement throughout the story and threw in an unexpected ending. I look forward to reading more of you stuff.

enjoyed it very much

Liked the insights to her thoughts/feeling. Her reaction to his watching was well balanced. To the anon who suggested blasting him with cold water-why? Domination does not and should not have to be about extremes. Subtlety is so much more arousing and meaningul. Too many stories, whether female or male dom, just decend into what other crappy things can I think to do to this person. No self control from the dom/me, no care for the sub/slave, too damn much smirking/nasty giggling/cackling laughter. Yuk. I like this approach much, much better. These two I would like to read more about.