Hybrid Story

interesting

I like your premise and how you're going about telling your story. There really is no constructive or negative feedback I could give you right now. I want to read more of your tale and then see if I have anything constructive to give you.

Interesting

Very curious to see where you take this.

So far so good

I like it so far. Will continue to read it as you post it

made a couple of mistakes

After reading the story again i saw that i made a few mistakes
1. the diamond comes out of the pommel, not the crossguard
2. it is not the hilt with the dragon/angel engravings it is the scabbard

don't jump

Try to get the story smooth. Beginning, Middle, then End. Don't jump from topic to topic, keep it smooth so the story flows together. Have it flow from point to point.

Likin it

Your syory has some great potential cant wait to read more

Infodump

Consider weaving abit more action into the information.

Several things to note

First: You've got a good start here
Second: You should probably look for an editor to check your work. It helps to have a second set of eyes reading a story to look for errors -- you're much less likely to catch your own errors than someone else is, because you subconsciously know what you meant to put there, so you brain glosses over it. I'd especially recommend not changing tenses from past to present and vice versa, as you did when describing the dagger.
Third: I'll probably sound bad if I say this, but asking people NOT to be an ass when they comment on your story is just as much a challenge to some as it is a deterrent to others, sadly enough. Most people will respect your request. The other people will behave just like they do on youtube -- responding with inflammatory behavior just because they can, and because they know it will annoy you.

It still needs work, (as do 98% of most stories when they're first started), but you've got a base to work from, and it's fairly good.

(And if you really want to stand out among other writers, I'd recommend creating lore and history for your world of magic, and introduce it gradually as needed, assuming you haven't planned to do that already.)

Please attribute any errors in spelling to the idiot who designed the auto-correct, syntax design, and keyboard design of my phone. Freakin' tiny buttons.

Great Prologue

Recommendation, when you write a prologue designate it as such (not that I really minded too much).

Hope he just has one transformation, albeit a slightly unique one I am imagining a wolf with scales instead of fur, with bat-like ears and small dragon-horns.

Something sorta like a Kirin or a Chimera i guess.

Sept 1 was a Saturday. The school year would not have started till after labour day.

He was not going to school on his birthday.

Everything sounds kool I hope it stays that way lol

Very nice start

Now that you've laid out your rules, please stick to them. I'll be the first to admit we can't know everything, but please, no blatant contradictions.
I'd refuse anonymous feedback, but I'm sure you will likely decide to on your own. It's difficult to respond to someone when you don't know who they are.