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by Ashesh901/28/13

Is this an ode

To prostate gland milkin'?! Nice try but the act itself does'nt appeal to me ----3-ed .

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by ArjayEiff01/29/13

ignorance

Sorry Ash not sure what prostate milking is, and not sure I would like it either. Ode is a perceptive comment, this is from a sequence of 31 Tanka which you may say aggregate to an ode.

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