I really liked your story. You should write more :)
Arden's reaction to Leara saying she wanted to get even was very amusing. I hope she's not just joking.
Beautifully written, Alex.
and exciting. I trust we're going to see what happens ?
Please continue this story. It is very well written and exciting. Don't let it end here like so many others here on Lit.
I love this series, have read most of your other stories and I really like the world that this and others stories are based. I hope you continue this and the others in this setting. Sometimes wish that we could, as a society get to the point where sex and love could be so freely given. It certainly would make a bunch of teens first times much better knowing that they are loved unconditionally. You should consider putting these similar stories into a overall larger running plot line and re-release them.
please finish this. i am worried. it has been awhile since this was posted. please finish. thank you.
I hope you're planning to write more: I want to read the rest of the story!
Also, thank you for not feeling like you have to put a sex scene in every chapter. Too many authors do that when it's not necessary, and it can ruin the flow of the story
finish the story! nothing worst than an unfinished story
to leave me hangin when it was getting really good !! Fucker (Scottyfirstname.lastname@example.org)
More please, I've really gotten addicted.
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