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Give Me the Man Pt. 06

byAlex De Kok©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/01/13

Great story ^_^

I really liked your story. You should write more :)

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by Anonymous02/01/13

Getting even

Arden's reaction to Leara saying she wanted to get even was very amusing. I hope she's not just joking.

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by Anonymous03/18/13

More please

Beautifully written, Alex.
and exciting. I trust we're going to see what happens ?

HP

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by coloradoj05/20/13

Continue

Please continue this story. It is very well written and exciting. Don't let it end here like so many others here on Lit.

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by OU812bf34208/21/13

Love this series!!!

Alex
I love this series, have read most of your other stories and I really like the world that this and others stories are based. I hope you continue this and the others in this setting. Sometimes wish that we could, as a society get to the point where sex and love could be so freely given. It certainly would make a bunch of teens first times much better knowing that they are loved unconditionally. You should consider putting these similar stories into a overall larger running plot line and re-release them.

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by Storm11302/24/14

finish please

please finish this. i am worried. it has been awhile since this was posted. please finish. thank you.

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by coinnach12/07/14

I hope you're planning to write more: I want to read the rest of the story!

Also, thank you for not feeling like you have to put a sex scene in every chapter. Too many authors do that when it's not necessary, and it can ruin the flow of the story

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by Anonymous01/29/15

finish the story! nothing worst than an unfinished story

finish the story! nothing worst than an unfinished story

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by Anonymous09/14/16

Asshole led me thru all that

to leave me hangin when it was getting really good !! Fucker (Scotty/slowrdr@aol.com)

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by Anonymous10/18/16

Good stuff!!

More please, I've really gotten addicted.

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by svied03/17/17

Me Too!

I know it's been four years but I also must cry for completion. :-P

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by Alex De Kok03/19/17

A note from the author - and an apology

Quite a few of you have urged me to continue this story, but I have to apologise and advise you that I suffered a stroke a couple of years ago, and writing erotic fiction suddenly seemed a lot less important. I have started writing again, but it's a slow and occasional process. I will try to post some more, but don't hold your breath!

Alex

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by tenetienne03/24/17

Appreciating your reply

We appreciate your reply letting us know the current state with you. Life happens and there are things we can't control. Yes, there are always those who are disgruntled with the fact they don't get to see what they expect, but for those of us who appreciate and thank you for your work, we understand.

If you are able and feel willing to pursue this, we will patiently wait and see what the future brings. Even if there is nothing further forthcoming from you, know we thank you for what you have provided us so far. It is far more than if you had never published them for us.

Thank you and may your future get better as time progresses.

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