Tears of the Fallen Ch. 03

Lovely

I was very pleased to see a new story.

Maybe the antidote will also help Pietro.

Love it...

Glad that the sisters could tell each other what was going on and now that Cass knows it for sure and has been told that her mate is Pietro can not wait to read what she does to make him see that as well. Curious to see how well it takes the news that his life is about to be turned upside down!

So glad to see you are back!!!

Just found the new series and stayed up all night to catch up! As always a great read can hardly wait for more.

Fantastic!

I definately love your stories about this pack and all the surprises revealed. I have to say I am also glad I found your stories after most had been written that way I don't have to wait for the next chapter...lol....almost wish I had found them even later so I wouldn't have to wait now. Please keep writing, you have kept me entranced, I have wept and laughed right along with your characters and prayed as well. I can't wait for the next chapter and so on.

Oh I love cassia!

What a cute girl for pietro!

next chapter...?

You've been gone for a while...

Where have I been all this time?

Ack! You are back! Like...last december... But where was I? OTL
But I am here now, already updated and ready for more.

I like Cassia. Maybe even more than Dara. Anyway. So she is Pietro's mate. Interesting. I think everyone is accounted for... Well, except Kal. Willow, perhaps? Idk. She should have scented him by now. A human? Another vamp? Elina is Karn's.

It's complicated. Haha. I like how you mess up your characters. Rhianna and Caleb are apart. Ashley is finding it hard to accept Liam's mate. And the latter is still up to no good. Then there's Kothi who is struggling with his other side and his heart. Hopefully, Dara realizes it too. Pietro is just so broken inside, it would be tough
for Cassia. It would be Cedar and Alexei all over again. Haha. I wonder how Alexei would react knowing one of his precious daughters is a mate to his bestfriend. Ha! Speaking of daughter, I hope Lacey and Rafe's unborn children are okay. At least Freya looks to be taking everything well. I wonder about Lily and Mac.

Whew. It is just the first three chapters and so much is going on already.

Keep writing. I await for more updates!

-Churos

When will the next chapters be out?????? Im intrigued with Pietro's development.

Ahh.

So glad you started back up :) I have been so antsy to find out what is going to happen. Keep up the great work!

What a fun new development! Write faster, please!!!

Another realization

Again, I really need to stop skimming so I can find out what happens faster. I was just struck with something else I should have noted from the last story, actually from Freya and Dayton's story. Why do Cassia & Dara, and Lily & Kallum have different last names? I know that the supernaturals don't wed like humans so Loretta, Ashleigh, and Cedar all kept their last names, but you have the children of one brother with his last name and the children of the other brother with his mate's. Just curious. It definitely helps differentiate between the two families when you're just being introduced to them, and I admit Cassia and Dara Romanov would sound odd - they sound better as Alexanders. Just curious, but don't feel you need to explain. It's just an observation.

I just re-read this story and had to comment again. It is always fun to read your work. Kudos to your editor as well. Doctime

poor pietro

iI cant wait to see how you develop the relationships with the hybrids. Cass does remind me aa lot of her mom....dunno why.

Cassia Alexander? How come she goes by her moms last name? And Dara is a Romanov?

Just once!

I must admit that just once it would be a really nice change to experience two mates simultaneously recognising each other, and loving each other immediately. What a whirlwind of love and passion and excitement that would be! It only has to be one couple, but surely they don't all have to be complicated :) just saying, be cute to see one with no one resenting the mating pull.

Antidote

Love the story &your writing . Am glad I have just started reading all the series because I would be a nervous wreak waiting . One small issue , they should have the ammo Reasa used so the have a pure example to use to create the antidote, but that wouldn't have been as much drama.