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Quincunx Ch. 11

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by sailandoar02/10/13

Only one ..

.. page. A good chance to practice being happy with what I have rather than disappointed about what I perceive as a lack. Thanks!

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by Beatnic_jazzman02/10/13

Sorry ;(

I had to cut the sections where it made sense. for those who are interested there's another sixteen to come.

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by Finchley02/10/13

Drawing me in

I'm enjoying this story more as it progresses, but I too am frustrated by the short segments. I feel you could have paid more attention to forming chapters, or posted bigger segments. That's a fairly mild criticism though, I am enjoying it and am intrigued. Not quite reached 5 stars for me yet, but it may do.

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