I like it so far...I'm glad she was saved. I hope the rogue gets what is coming to him
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Anonymous02/05/13
It was very short
but no matter. You have cleared up the confusion from the first chapter and set up the story for a very different probable outcome, which will only be good to a lot of readers here.
I look forward to where you see this story going next. It's a very good start! Keep going.
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Too short of an update.
I like it so far...I'm glad she was saved. I hope the rogue gets what is coming to him
It was very short
but no matter. You have cleared up the confusion from the first chapter and set up the story for a very different probable outcome, which will only be good to a lot of readers here.
I look forward to where you see this story going next. It's a very good start! Keep going.
Good chapter . I'm really liking this story .
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really nice even though the chapter was short it was much better than the first i really liked it cant wait for more.
more
they are a little short but good. i want more
Good start
good start but too short!
Agreed much better than the first chapter even if it is a little short. Well done keep going.
When are you making another
When are you going to make another chapter?
Very Good!
Waiting for next chapter! I hope its longer.
As we all do...
Please make longer and post more
I'm loving the story so far just make it longer its already an instant favorite
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