All Comments on 'Arctic Shock Ch. 02'

Too short of an update.

I like it so far...I'm glad she was saved. I hope the rogue gets what is coming to him

but no matter. You have cleared up the confusion from the first chapter and set up the story for a very different probable outcome, which will only be good to a lot of readers here.

I look forward to where you see this story going next. It's a very good start! Keep going.

Good chapter . I'm really liking this story .

really nice even though the chapter was short it was much better than the first i really liked it cant wait for more.

they are a little short but good. i want more

good start but too short!

Agreed much better than the first chapter even if it is a little short. Well done keep going.

When are you going to make another chapter?

Waiting for next chapter! I hope its longer.

As we all do...

I'm loving the story so far just make it longer its already an instant favorite