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All the Stars are Brighter Now

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by Anonymous

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by SweetOblivion01/29/13

Nicely down

A real pleasure to read - thank you. Sweet O.

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by demure10101/30/13

I agree with Sweet O -

Beautiful - and cleverly constructed!

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by Ashesh901/30/13

5-ed

Very Wild Night & very beautiful poem !

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by Desejo01/30/13

Very nice

It's interesting - this is a very visual poem for me, but there is almost no actual description of place in it. I think what makes this strong is the room to project one's own experience on the frame of the poem. If that makes any sense. Well done.

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