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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sorry...

But there is nothing erotic or loving in this. Gordy is a sorry excuse for a human being doing this to "Prize". He has no redeeming qualities. He doesn't give two shits about the poor young man. This story lacks any kind of care or compassion from any character in it. After four chapters, I've come to dislike Gordy so much that I hope Prize finds some way to kill the sob.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

t would really like to see prize wrap that chain around gordy's neck during the night and not let go till he was dead as a doornail. What is prize's real past?

Doesn't he find it too coincidental that he is trained so violently and then rescued by a man who wants him to act in that way?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

Yes Gordy is not a very nice man, but there may be redemption if his feelings for Prize soften and he begins to care. I want to see what happens next.

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