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Mom and I Ch. 05

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by R M Roxinger02/15/13

I don't want a pickle...

...I just wanna ride my motor-sickle. Thanks for another good story!

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by digdaddyrich02/15/13

Nicely done Shoeslayer

I liked that the story was more about sex and less about his fetish.

He needs to get his mom and her friend Janet into a good three-way, and fuck them both, and perhaps get the girls to put on a show for him.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous12/04/15

There could be a little less bike information.

Short stories are cool, but they need to have fewer details. There needs to be time for fucking, or it should be two pages long. Don't get me wrong, the motorcycle is cool, but when you bring Janet into the picture also, there really isn't time for fucking.

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