Olivia and Derrick Ch. 05

Olivia said she doesn't regret screwing Derrick, I wonder if she will feel the same way if she see him with another female.

nice

so far this has been a good story. But i think that we should read derrick point of view. Plus its needs to be longer -cumonmi

LMFAO!

I literally almost pissed when Andrea says smacks it, flips it, rubs it down! I sang OH NO after that line, lmao you took it there!

Editing could be a little tighter...

But I like the story so far

come on....

Post the next chapter I want to knw what happens next.........p.s.it a great story

more please

UPDATE

OMG UPDATE

please update!! I can't take it anymore!

Please hurry

Can anyone actually finish a story around here???

WTF

WTF Was THIS ? IF YOU ACTUALLY THINK YOU DID A GOOD JOB OF COMPLETING THIS FUCKING THING YOU CALL A "STORY". OBVIOUSLY YOU ARE. FUCKED. SMGDH :l

Enjoyable

I enjoyed all of your chapters this morning and I hope you plan on continuing this story.

loved it!!

I truly enjoyed the wholle series. From beginning to end a real love connection unfolded in more ways than one! I loved that he liked her despite her lack of confidence and when he brought it out she beamed all the more just for him. Great story. Loved the ending! Keep up the great work and don't let the negative comments deter you.

Is it over or will there be more? I really got into this. I'd love a few more chapters with some steamy scenes, major angst and then a HEA. :)

wish there was more

I have been reading literotica for about a month now. There are a lot of good stories but it is annoying when you find a good story and it is not complete.

Can you please continue this story im in love

Good story

I must say I enjoyed that throughly. There should be another chapter or two...

PLESAE FINISH THESE STORY

PLESAE FINISH THESE STORY NOT JUST FOR YOU BUT FOR ME TO I LOVE THIS STORY SO PLEASE FINISH IT NOT BE LIKE THE OTHERS AND JUST LEAVE US HANGIN BECAUSE IT REALLY IS A GREAT SYORY

Are They Together?

Please finish this because i've gotta know what happens next 😭😭😭😩😩

WOW

This is great. Hope you will finish it soon