All Comments on 'Don't Fancy Yours, Mate!'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice story,

but beware of stereotypes: Not all sexist smart-asses can be recognized by their beer bellies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
finale

I was expecting it to end with jane being his wife,older sister,aunt,mom whatever that would hev been going the obvious sterotypical route and not the beer belly equals smart ass as another comment put wonder what happens next morning when Andrew has to try to explain how he was tired [drunk] and couldnt really manage to give his secretary a good seeing to

Sidney43Sidney43about 11 years ago

Very well written.....and Jane is oh so hot!!!

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