I love your series but was a bit lost to what happened, with your writing. I still like the story but the mistakes took away from the full enjoyment. I'll still be looking forward for the next chapter in your story.
And I DO believe there will be more to this.......PLEASE!
All in all a wonderful storyline, I hope that you will continue it, I would like to find out how Steve manages to have children with Suzanne.
I feel there is more to tell about them especially the son and daughter.
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