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by Anonymous

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by zespriadict02/03/13

More please

Loved this story so much
Hopefully there will be more

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by jpz007ahren02/04/13

Excellent

Very good storyline. Kinda short but so were mine. Its daunting to read those other storys that are 3 and 5 pages long when it takes so much effort to even write a 1zie for this site. Some basic punctuation and word errors, but not too distracting for me. Having a second pair of eyes or even just reading your story aloud can help. Takes patience though xD

Very nice read. Eagerly awaiiting the next part. 5 stars from me.

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by bierce02/04/13

Good beginning

You have given just enough facts to hook interest. Please continue.

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