One of the most tasteful and literate stories I've seen here...I enjoyed every word! Excellent job.
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Anonymous02/07/13
Lovely!
This was a sweet story, I thank you for writing it. It makes me happy to see that not all sexual stories have to be crude, this was done with class and romance. I also must praise you on the allusions to past texts.
English
A most lovely tale.
Fine writing, and a real story. Thank you.
Lovely!
Very much enjoyed the story, and the irony of using the verses from Shakespeare's MidSUMMER in the cold of February was charming. Nicely done.
Literate and intelligent
Well worth waiting for - great stuff - loved the excerpts from Goblin Market &c. Sweet O.
Beautiful!
One of the most tasteful and literate stories I've seen here...I enjoyed every word! Excellent job.
Lovely!
This was a sweet story, I thank you for writing it. It makes me happy to see that not all sexual stories have to be crude, this was done with class and romance. I also must praise you on the allusions to past texts.
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