The story is tightly written and perhaps too tightly written.
The plot for this chapter was for the siblings to consummate a sexual affair, but some explanations could have eased my mind, or did I miss something while I was reading?
Who's party was it that they were at? Was it a public party or was it for just family?
Where are their parents while all of his is going on?
Will all of these quesions be answered in the following chapters?
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Anonymous04/18/13
ONCE AGAIN DIGDADDY IS CLUELESS
it is stated that the party is at the fathers bosses house and the parents are on a vacation. try reading a little more closely and you might find the stories you give rave reviews to DON'T DESERVE THEM.
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Anonymous08/30/13
Epic!
I love your writing style! It was tightly written, but it only bolstered the sexual tension between the two. Marvelous job! I look forward to future stories!
English
Loved it!
That was incredible... very sensual and hot! Reading it made me very wet! I look forward to reading part 3 soon! :)
Wonderful description of sibling love or "Twincest". Totally natural for such siblings to share their bodies and love/lust .
This chapter left me with some questions.
The story is tightly written and perhaps too tightly written.
The plot for this chapter was for the siblings to consummate a sexual affair, but some explanations could have eased my mind, or did I miss something while I was reading?
Who's party was it that they were at? Was it a public party or was it for just family?
Where are their parents while all of his is going on?
Will all of these quesions be answered in the following chapters?
ONCE AGAIN DIGDADDY IS CLUELESS
it is stated that the party is at the fathers bosses house and the parents are on a vacation. try reading a little more closely and you might find the stories you give rave reviews to DON'T DESERVE THEM.
Epic!
I love your writing style! It was tightly written, but it only bolstered the sexual tension between the two. Marvelous job! I look forward to future stories!
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