All Comments on 'Old Ties Ch. 01'

Great start will keep a look out for more. Hopefully soon and please please don't leave it half finished please that is the most annoying thing for us readers. Best of luck.

I really appreciate the feedback, so I will be posting a new chapter soon ^^

Fun, intriguing start. Love the. Characters so far. If you can get emotions from your readers with such a short start this proves to be a very interesting story! :o)