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Another Chapter Please
Looks like a story that can support a second chapter. Curious to see what else Kathy dreams up for Jack and how he takes care of her when the cast comes off.
5*****
My pleasure.
Not bad
The 'valentines' connection was a bit weak but it worked well enough to get things going. Writing quality is fine, dialogue is a bit stilted and unrealistic but it works for the purpose. Didn't particularly need the 'inch long nipples' and 'biggest breasts ever' bits - it was enough that 'her womanly curves excited him'.
Good luck with the contest.
Can't wait to see after he's out of the cast!
Kathy sounds like a truly wonderful woman, and you nailed the bit about people who consider themselves unattractive and how they smolder underneath more than anyone. I just hope Jack gets over his self-pitying and appreciates what a treasure has been dropped in his lap!
Jack made sure Kathy's name was removed from his visitation list.
Who needs the aggravation? And who would trust a bitch like that? Ridiculous story.
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