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Tanka #27

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by Anonymous

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by ArjayEiff02/01/13

31 Tanka

All 31 are free here: http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/ArjayEiff

I'll be posting them here over time

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by HarryHill02/01/13

Really liked this one r j f

5 ed

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by Desejo02/02/13

Liked this

Normally double spacing on poems is not something I like, but in this case it works, because it gives the reader time to absorb each line. Well done.

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by SweetOblivion02/03/13

Perfect Tanka

Great form - well understated - nice - Sweet O.

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by demure10102/24/13

Good -

and a nice descriptive piece in so few words!

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