by carl420
Many problems, both small (the word is "shudder", not "shutter") and not-so-small (switching back and forth between referring to the woman as "her" and then as "you").
I am living life in a wheelchair as well, and was pleased at how that was incorporated into the story without it being a big deal.
Another thing that was interesting: Althugh I don't think it was explicitly stated, I got the imprression that the woman was black, and the man caucasian (although I might have read myself into it) but again, a big deal was not made of it - nice.