All Comments on 'Rebirth Ch. 05'

One of the best stories I've read in ages. Thank you. Will look forward to more.

Great story,from beginning to the end.Loved the characters and the plot well written. Happy for Mac and Aiden for over coming.

Loving a prego girl so hard she aborts the baby or finishing inside to give the kid a facial cumshot!

Thanks for writing such a great story!

Looking forward to more of your work.

I was hooked from the first couple paragraphs of this incredible & very realistic story. I know it's customary to comment on each chapter but I didn't want to stop reading until the end, so I've saved all my praise for the completed work. I look forward to reading more of your work and all chapters are a 5 star rating.

Blessed Be,

Peach

I really really loved the story. Great characterisation, reasonable plot. One of the best I have found on this board!

Excellent story. I didn't expect to be able to relate to the characters so clearly.

oved your story and would like to read a sequel...maybe about a grown-up baby Phoenix or whatever!

I wish you hadn't rushed through Mac's changes, though. I mean, her whole emotional healing process happened a little bit too fast. I think it would have been interesting to read about it in some more detail, make Aiden work for it some more! :P

Still, beautifully written. Congrats!

I LOVED this story. I never thought to find a story like this on a site like Literotica ever.

I personally am gay and still loved this. Seeing both of them with their pain and loneliness find healing and love was just wow. Her finding something she thought to never find again love and laughter was amazing. This story I read not for the sex but for the great story and characters. I will be seeing if this author has more to read in the future.