it would be great if u add to this . i enjoyed it
If it was a little longer it would have been even better.
Don't bother writing any more
Many friends are in the same boat. Neither wants to make first move. right circumstances and a little alcohol can force the issue.. should take a chance
"Load of rubbish"? The anonymous poster who made that comment is an idiot. This is certainly not rubbish - far from it. It's well written, even if not to some readers' taste.
Kudos to the author.
I think it was a terrific story. I hope you write more.
At least she seems to know how to eat mud-bugs!
I'd like to imagine they are still living happily ever after right now!
Very nice. Romantic. Great lead in.
This is a very goof story ii hope u write another one
This is a great read. Very fresh and different. Thanks for sharing.
This is a great read! Very romantic and well written. Just like every girl wants her first time to be! Good job!
I JUST CANT READ ANYTHING RIGHT NOW.
I KEEP READING THE STORIES WITH A SMALL VOICE IN MY HEAD THAT SOUNDS LIKE A MIXURE BETWEEN A HILLBILLY AND FORREST GUMP
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