If it was a little longer it would have been even better.
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Anonymous02/01/13
Fucking load off rubbish
Don't bother writing any more
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Anonymous02/01/13
Nice short story
Many friends are in the same boat. Neither wants to make first move. right circumstances and a little alcohol can force the issue.. should take a chance
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Anonymous02/01/13
moron
"Load of rubbish"? The anonymous poster who made that comment is an idiot. This is certainly not rubbish - far from it. It's well written, even if not to some readers' taste.
Kudos to the author.
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Anonymous02/02/13
terrific
I think it was a terrific story. I hope you write more.
This is a great read. Very fresh and different. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous07/23/13
Amazing
This is a great read! Very romantic and well written. Just like every girl wants her first time to be! Good job!
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Anonymous07/15/15
OMG
I JUST CANT READ ANYTHING RIGHT NOW.
I KEEP READING THE STORIES WITH A SMALL VOICE IN MY HEAD THAT SOUNDS LIKE A MIXURE BETWEEN A HILLBILLY AND FORREST GUMP
more then friends
it would be great if u add to this . i enjoyed it
Good read
If it was a little longer it would have been even better.
Fucking load off rubbish
Don't bother writing any more
Nice short story
Many friends are in the same boat. Neither wants to make first move. right circumstances and a little alcohol can force the issue.. should take a chance
moron
"Load of rubbish"? The anonymous poster who made that comment is an idiot. This is certainly not rubbish - far from it. It's well written, even if not to some readers' taste.
Kudos to the author.
terrific
I think it was a terrific story. I hope you write more.
GEAUX AMANDA!
At least she seems to know how to eat mud-bugs!
Great story!
sooo cute!
I'd like to imagine they are still living happily ever after right now!
Great
Very nice. Romantic. Great lead in.
Wonderful
This is a very goof story ii hope u write another one
MORE THAN A STORY*****
This is a great read. Very fresh and different. Thanks for sharing.
Amazing
This is a great read! Very romantic and well written. Just like every girl wants her first time to be! Good job!
OMG
I JUST CANT READ ANYTHING RIGHT NOW.
I KEEP READING THE STORIES WITH A SMALL VOICE IN MY HEAD THAT SOUNDS LIKE A MIXURE BETWEEN A HILLBILLY AND FORREST GUMP
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