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by Desejo02/02/13

Liked the implied links between the stanzas

You get points for teaching me a new scrabble alternative spelling (aether. who knew?); your choice of capitalization is something for both readers and the poet to think about - on lines and letters (Id or id? on, of lower case beginning of lines, but not like or then? Why? hmmm).

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by HarryHill02/02/13

Id is a personification of the self

hense a proper noun. As for the other... Meeh, it's always something. Art and english are tricky things. Especially mine. Hope I can keep amusing you.

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by Ashesh902/03/13

Nicely written , Harry !

5-ed.

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