All Comments on 'Mom's a Tease'

best wank ive ever had.

It's a hot story but will read better if you fix all of the typos.

I will do a better job editing part two of this story. To be honest I was a bit drunk and horny when I submitted this one.

It's been told so many time before, I only gave it a 3 star vote. a good read, with a few typo's ...................Thanks...........LAROC OF AGES

How long will we have to wait for the second installment? Not too long I hope.

could be any better.....except if I already had part two in one hand. Great job!! A five!

I am currently finishing part two and will have it edited and posted as soon as I can.

Selfish Teasing only goes so far

before the tolerance level is reached.

He's going to snap and psycho wreck

that yummy mommy pussy just like

every loving son should....

Very good start, can't wait for part2 and many more. This has real potential to be a great stroke series.

This is such a great beginning to a marvelous series! The sentence above shows the author's sharp insight. Though their sons don't often notice, plenty of mothers pay real close attention to what's happening in their boy's pants. If the boy is hard in his pants, his mom is gratified by her son's manly virility. If, again as in the story, she surmises that her boy's hard on is due to his own mother and what he sees of her voluptuous body, mom is greatly flattered. It even gets her mommy-hole--that wonderful hole between her legs that her boy came into the world from--nice and wet. Here the mother "accidentally" cops some good feels of her boy's fat dick, finally getting Paul to toss his shorts and let his mother gaze on his big stiff prick, standing tall and proud in all its glory. Mom tosses her swimsuit as well, and now her boy sees what lots of boys'd love to see, his own mother's incomparable cunt. Now Paul's going crazy with the need to blow his young balls, just shoot a big geyser of his creamy sperm in the air. But mom will not permit that, she's got a lot better use for her boy's big doses of rich semen. Please, please, dear Shysquirter, tell us what that is real soon!

A great start and and excellent story. A ranking of '5' doesn't do justice. Can't wait for part 2......

Well done indeed :)

Okay, waiting for chapter 2 and hoping it will be here soon! A few typos, but nothing that detracted from the story! And as for your comment on how things were when you wrote the story, that was a hot splash for the story!

Great start, she's already dreamed of having two young studs maybe later his nerdy friends can help him out with his mom. Many more chapters please.

Hot! Nice ramp up!

This and your other story, Open Doors, are both just so amazing. This one too is without a doubt a five star story.

The women in both stories just come off as so beautiful and sensual, the teasing in both stories are about to drive me insane. Keep up the amazing work, you are definitely my fav new writer.

I liked your story but sometimes the typo is bad so I didn't fully understood.

It would have been fine if you didn't write their conversation in two parts. It's disturbing when the mom asks two questions, acts like she is answered and then we ear the son's answers and what he does.

Hopefully he gets to blow in her mouth soon. And then some hot anal sex.

A great story but much too repetitive with the back and forth from mother to son

this story got my blood going to the rite spot you have to excuse me while i handle it

It seemed that every paragraph had a problem with grammar.

I suggest you either get an editor, or read it out loud!

SCHUPPINZIGH

shame on you for teasing your son....love it....hard and waiting for part 2....well done and to hell with the typos........this was hot

Story structure was awful! No clear breakup of what was actually going on which was sometimes confusing and killed the story really.. also you may want to get an editor!

Yummy!

Really fucking hot. I love mom/son pool stories.

the structure is a bit confusing, but the way in which you thought the story is wonderful, cock hardening...

What more can I say except shy is something you are not, at least in writing, now let me go to the next Chapter and see if I can get rid of the same problem she left her son with.

Great story.

Interesting structure telling the Mom's and Son's view.

Great buildup and interesting dom Mom twist at the end.

Please keep writing. This is a great read. Thanks

Beautiful Sexy Mom, Just what every Teenage boy needs, to fuck when we get home from School. Peter From Australia.

As Paul went inside he could hear his mom in her bedroom, and she was masturbating. That was the last straw as Paul took off his suit and stroked himself hard. He interrupted his mom's dildo play as he barged into her room fully erect. "You don't need that fake dick mom, you're going to get the real thing from me!" With that he jumped on top of his mom on her bed. She tried to resist, but he held her hands above her head tightly. First Julie felt his chest smashing her tits down, then she felt his big cock enter her pussy in one mighty thrust. "Oh Paul no, I'm your mother," she shrieked. Paul only picked up speed, and began to thrust into Julie's love tunnel even harder. "I'm your mother Paul, get off me," Julie pleaded. "You think you can set the rules, then go and break them yourself?" Paul growled. "I'm fucking you until I bust the biggest nut of my life inside your pussy!" he told her. Then he let go of her hands and grabbed her shoulders as he began to thrust into his mom as hard as he could. Julie couldn't control herself, her son's cock was pounding her painfully, but she felt so alive, so full of her own desires, she began moaning in pleasure. All Paul could think about was how good his mom's pussy felt, as he fucked her like there was no tomorrow. The bed was shaking like there was an earthquake happening as Paul's climax was fast approaching. Julie could tell by the urgency of her son's thrusts, he was close to coming. She felt her own orgasm on the verge of surging through her body. Without realizing at first Julie began to give her son recognition of his efforts. "Oh god Paul, that's so fucking good!" "Fuck me honey!" "Make your mother cum baby! "Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes!" "Oh god Paul, I'm coming baby!" "Oh honey, oh honey, oh honey!" "Oh yes Paul!" "Oh god Baby!" Hearing his mother's orgasm, Paul began to cum himself, continuously shooting steam, after stream, of his spunk into his mother's willing pussy. "Uh, uh, uh, uh, oh god mom, uh, uh, uh!" You're so good mom!" "Oh yes, oh yes!" "Huh, huh, huh, huh, oh god!" "Oh god yes mom!"

I was hard from just the thought, Thanks for the good story, I wish I had been the Son ! Peter.

A few spelling errors but otherwise a great story. But thinking about it, if I was writing this story I would have had one hand on the keyboard and the other in my lap, stroking myself. Spelling errors would have been the least of my problems. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. 5*.

"These are my pussy lips." "This is my clit. It is like my little penis."

Her son is supposed to be 18-years-old. Has he been living in a cave for 18 years? No internet access? Is he brain damaged?

Brain damage might explain why he asks his mom for sex on the 2nd question of Truth or Dare.

Clumsily written, and so clinical as to be quite non-erotic. And neither of the protagonists were worth a damn. Not worth reading.

Yes, please.

Hot!

Written by a 10 year old?

I thoroughly enjoy mother/son incestuous love stories. In real life I have no problem with mutually consenual incest. Mutually consensual incest means (1) Both parties willing enter into act; (2) There is no positional powerplay; (3) There is no fear of emotional abandonment; (4) There is no fear of emotional and/or physical abuse; and (5) Throughout and for the duration of the pairing, there is respect for each other's needs and wants. In this story, the mother does not know her son at all and it appears over the past 10-12 years she has made no attempt to determine his mental and emotional needs. She places her needs above anyone else's, including her son's. She wants her husband back and is willing to substitute her son for him on her terms only. Finally, she does not seem to care about his self-awareness, self-confidence, ego, id and/or psychological we;; being.

Well you had me hooked hard for a while but when they started playing truth or dare I had to dial it back a bit. Kids play that game but I can't ever remember playing it after grade school. Most adults tend to be more direct without wasting time playing games or they turn to seduction to get what they want. Okay, he did as she aske him and was jacking off and let her know he was cuming, so why the hell did she have to slap him and stomp out of the pool like a prick teasing bitch?

Sorry, but with all the typos, errors and the way the story is going, I think I'll pass on the other chapters. Too bad as I usually enjoy Mother/Son incest stories.