by TinyBeth
did not see that coming at all at the end,i just cried,why oh why did you have to let him die in another country and not in her arms,after maybe getting injured there.
This is not horror. This is a story of love and tragedy. Awesome story.
A beautiful story. I don't think it should fall under horror, it's a romance. The ending surprised me and was truly sad. Thank you for writing this.
My compliments on continuing Robert E. Howard's tradition of having friends and/or lovers come back to life for one final meeting. This was by far the most romantic I've ever seen. In addition to ironsoldier80's comment, I have to agree with him that this is not horror. It's a truly romantic love story, and my girlfriend agrees.
As I said in my '21 Guns' comment, thank you for your support, TinyBeth. :)
Out of all the stories I have read on literotica this is definitely my favorite!
It's tasteful and liberating for all woman to realize their self worth. The sex scene does not have the porn like feel to it like 99% of all other stories on this sight but gives you the feeling of love and adoration between husband and wife. The ending was a complete mind f$&@ I must admit and brought tears to my eyes. Bravo!!!
This story brings back memories of my 25 years in the Army. I had the sad duty of being on a notification team that when to a home to tell his wife that had been KIA. She broke down in tears and kooked at her 5yo and 9yo and told them in a breaking voice thart their father would not be coming home. I almost lost it and could feel tears begin to form in my eyes and I quickly wiped my eyes before anyone else saw me crying. So people who hate the military I do not see any of you out there putting your like on the line so you can enjoy the freedoms this country has. Freedom comes a price and that price is the blood and lives of those that serve in the military. Retired Army NCO