All Comments on 'An Unlikely Valentine'

I hope to see more chapters soon.

Lovely writing . Thank you

I was a Carl in a lot of ways. Your story helped me remember what an amazing experience it was, although it took more than one night to have all of the experiences in the story. Good story, even without my peculiar perspective.

Nerds need loving too. As it turned out, Carl and Carrie both benefited by Carrie befriending him. Now that they're together, we want another chapter to learn what happened after the senior prom.

Great story, and good luck in the Valentine's contest.

Great story. Maybe it was I was a nerd, but with just average equipment. I hope he is as lucky as I have been!

this nerd needs to end up with the cheerleader....

maybe she realizes she has stronger feelings for him...

maybe she'll end up pregnant...

nerd + cheerleader = happily ever after

just look at "revenge of the nerds"

Good Job well done!

That was a great story, well written. It needs a follow up, because she seems to want more of his cock! Well done!

Hope there's a sequel!

This was in Feb 2013 but no chapter 2 or sequel, damn this was great.

There are not chapters for this story but there are other stories with the same characters.

-TK

Thank you! Well written and HOT!

Seemed that the story deserved a little more finale. But a fine story! Thanks, tk5555.

Pretty lucky valentine for him

Outstanding ! ! !