All Comments on 'Lana - Double Time'

unerotic.

Lana sounds like a yummy slut.....gives me an idea or two for hubby to have a photo shoot with me

Short and sweet.

A formula that more authors should have used, really.

Hubby wants Stud to do doggie on his Sweetie, then gets pissy about her liking it?!?!

WTF. Can't have a score more than 3* !?!?!

make your stories longer. they are good though.

Did you say what you wanted to say?

Did you ramble on and on and bore anyone?

Are you happy with the final story?

If so then the story is just right (Write?) snicker

Do it your way.

As Anonymous so I don't get 1 bombed

Is he sending mixed signals, or letting her know that the sky's the limit?

One of the worst! "1*" !!!!

Exciting series - lets have her properly gangbanged... :-)

Way to fast. No character development. What do you do with the pictures? Why are you surprised that the stud blew his load in your wife? Come on, slow down and write. There is far more you are not explaining.

Nice and really hot text. My cock will explode

Cuck and mindless whore story.