by Jasmynn_Brown
Dear Jasmynn Brown
You said it all.
Bringing skill and the ability to love to a relationship with innocence at its core.
I loved it
Of course in real life one stumbles on ignorant and blundering though eventually a couple manage harmony.
My generation, I am 82 years old, were uplifted by "The Joy of Sex" which liberated.
How indeed can you develop a lasting relationship retaining the mutual wonder, innocence, dependence and commitment that good sex and indeed a good relationship demand.
You write and draw with sensitivity and the love of people.
Perhaps you could cast your mind to writing a story about building a partnership above and beyond the training school?
Do we really need the school or are there other ways to learn?
Regards
William
A good, profound story and very well illustrated too.
More of the same vein.
What wonderful comments you have, both so deserved. I can't add more and can only say you are fantastic. Thank you.
Doubtful, since she has given up on the author whose love was totally unselfish in search of physical gratification.
I'm going to comment only on the art work which I thought was very superior for pencil drawings. I hope to see more. An Hoa Rifleman
I don’t think I’ve read such a beautiful romantic tale that flowed as well as this one , it seemed to carry you along on a gentle wave . The writing was so the epitome of perfection , the storyline was fabulous and the sketching was magnificent , what’s not to love ? Thank you , I was truly impressed and thoroughly entertained!