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Older Sister's Sex Toys

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by oldnornry02/04/13

Love or lust?

A great story. Every guy probably wishes he had a sister like her. It seems like lust at first but definitely needs ch 2.to find out. Keep writing.

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by joe3211202/04/13

Taboo

I loved the beginning but the middle and end revealed too much. I gave you a 4 :) cuz you're a good writer. I havn't been published yet so I have no room to talk. The one thing that comes to mind is TABOO. To me, it's the hush hush secrecy that makes taboo... taboo, especially between the culprates. It's just my opinion though. Good story. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

Love It

I had a sister who was like that so it was nice to read a story that reminded me of her. But I am still hoping you write chapter two of the politician

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by LAROC02/04/13

As always you got it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It took some time to get there, but when you did, oh!! boy. This story must go on, Now that they have found each other. This is the place to start a real story. The first part was great,the second part could be greater. PLEASE !!! don't stop this one....thanks it was a good read.............LAROC OF AGES

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by Anonymous02/04/13

CHAPTER 2

This was an amazing read, You HAVE To write a 2nd Chapter to this,
You have great skill!!
Keep it up.

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by irishkenny197402/04/13

Great dialogue

You write dialogue extremely well. And use of her book was a great vehicle to get to their sex. My only criticism would be that there was a little lack of description of the characters. Overall, well written and sexy!

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by tombbn5702/04/13

Great Buildup - Good Finish

I liked the way the story built up. Led me into lots of anticipation of the final act. I would have liked the final act to have been delayed till the sister came home and then a more thorough oral and fucking session. . Overall a great job.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

I'm ROCK HARD!!!!!

I wonder how a 10 by 3 vibrator would have worked on her,.....she would have screamed for more!!!

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by arseko02/04/13

Bad sister

Great story.
Lucky brother and this is a sister every growing boy should have.
Wild with a capital H for HOT.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

more

Wow!!! I see so many scenarios to this, Like her girlfriends, marriage, babies, and so on. Keep going.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

Great Story!

Well written just the way I like, not too graphic, somewhat plausible. Definitely love to see another installment . . . maybe since she begged him to come inside her, she later descides she want's brother's baby.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

Good Read!

It had all the elements in the right places...Now curious about the new living arrangements!

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by Bodhi197802/05/13

More, please!

I loved the fun and flirty nature of that story. I hope you continue it!

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by Roblover02/05/13

Great Read!!!

Awsome story. Reminds me of my relationship with my sister, best friend lovers. Post more when you have a chance.
Take care :)

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by gagnec02/05/13

wow

Wow what a good story. I m so jealous. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous02/05/13

great story

I hope you continue this, it is an awesome read

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Ama-Zing!!!!

Please write more!!!!!

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Loved it

One of the best I have read yet. Keeps you interested

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Awesome

I don't usually comment but it's an awesome well written story!

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by Anonymous02/05/13

we need more like this.

Your writting is very good, love the story, and it kept me on edge. Keep it going.

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by Anonymous02/05/13

WOW..... REALLY..... JUST WOW

LOVED IT... SENSUAL,ROMANTIC,VERY EROTIC... I SOAKED MY PANTIES HALFWAY THROUGH FROM THE ANTICIPATION ALONE... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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by Lee201202/05/13

Foru stars due to writing

but "sis" needs a lil more character. Great story that kept me hard

Led

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by Anonymous02/05/13

part 2 please

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Absolutely fucking sucking wonderful

More and more of this please and soon

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by rosspal02/05/13

Chapter Two

You absolutely have to add another or two parts to this story. 5++

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by papadirt02/06/13

as always

Fantastic. Thank you.

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by Anonymous02/06/13

amazing

please right more like this! bro sis is such a turn on and to have all the fun teasing and playfulness before the actions was perfect!!!!

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by Anonymous02/06/13

Outstanding

Great read. Good story, truly plausible characters, and great action. Hoping for more!

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by digdaddyrich02/07/13

Oh hell yes !

A super storyline that needs a second chapter.

Now that they have the ground rules set, we need to read how they lived together.

I'm sure that they didn't have too much free time on their hands because they would be so busy fucking each other half to death.

Thanks for the read.

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by xxxpuppies02/07/13

I love it!!!

This story really turned me on, really...

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by Anonymous02/07/13

"Fine. You can go ahead and fuck me if you want. I guess it would have happened eventually." wow, what a "hopeless romantic" lol, I'm sure this guy will have fun becoming his sisters new dildo but I'm getting so bored of these 2-3 pages depth-less stroke stories. very well written and plausible though so i guess i am just in a pissy mood lol. 5 stars.

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by Anonymous02/08/13

Great story sad it had to end!

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by Incubus40802/08/13

Hot Story

Wish it was longer

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by Anonymous02/08/13

sequel please

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by Anonymous02/10/13

Fantastic!

Another awesome story from a great author. Can't wait to see what's next. Keep em comimg.

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by KingC50902/10/13

Interesting reading..

I liked the way the plot line built to the finally. The new rules were a bonus. I liked how it played out.

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by crabber302/16/13

loved the story

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by Anonymous03/05/13

"This Story's Gettin' Me Hard Already"

I have to give you credit for writing such a hot story, and I do emphasize the word "hot". You've got to come up with a sequel. Courtney is one hot girl; and I'd bang the s**t out of her in a New York minute!!!

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by Anonymous04/02/13

Awesome

You are by far my favorite writer on here. Keep them coming!!!

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by Oleguy04/08/13

Affirmative.

Just have to agree with all the lucky folk who read this before me.
They said it all.

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by Anonymous05/17/13

nice story

Aside from a few grammatical/syntax errors, it was a nice story. there were some awkward parts where the words didnt seem to flow right but on a whole, good story.

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by Anonymous05/25/13

Nice hot story. Better with slower buildup ...

This was a nice situational story and an erotic end. Personally, I would have preferred it if after the finding of the book, there was'nt a direct discussion about it but a slower buildup of the tension leading up to boundaries being crossed and the actual act. Good story!

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by Anonymous06/17/13

Yum

Thank you for the erotic read!

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by bondpleasure06/30/13

A really great account

That was so vivid an account that I am seeping pre-cum from my rod! You have written well!! I must read some more.
Leo - from Australia.

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by octabrain10/16/13

The hottest bro/sis story I've ever read.

I was turned on when she decided to keep brother's seed in her pussy. I would love to read about her having his baby.

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by SirRob196603/07/14

Hot story.

That was one of the very best incest stories i have ever read. Please write another with the same characters. I feel there is some more fun to be had with those two.

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by CJ69CJ04/18/14

Best story by far it really turned me on good job

Best story by far it really turned me on good job

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by Anonymous06/23/14

This story is so HOT !! Got me so hard and was well written !! I think we Have to Know what they do next ??

Thank you ............ your stories are all very good.

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by Anonymous07/05/14

Want to continue pls

What the hell you doing man!!! Damn hot story...I like it

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by DYNO22407/24/14

GO OCTOBRAIN

I agree with OCTOBRAIN nock her up could use a few more chapters.

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