All Comments on 'Older Sister's Sex Toys'

A great story. Every guy probably wishes he had a sister like her. It seems like lust at first but definitely needs ch 2.to find out. Keep writing.

I loved the beginning but the middle and end revealed too much. I gave you a 4 :) cuz you're a good writer. I havn't been published yet so I have no room to talk. The one thing that comes to mind is TABOO. To me, it's the hush hush secrecy that makes taboo... taboo, especially between the culprates. It's just my opinion though. Good story. Keep up the good work.

I had a sister who was like that so it was nice to read a story that reminded me of her. But I am still hoping you write chapter two of the politician

It took some time to get there, but when you did, oh!! boy. This story must go on, Now that they have found each other. This is the place to start a real story. The first part was great,the second part could be greater. PLEASE !!! don't stop this one....thanks it was a good read.............LAROC OF AGES

This was an amazing read, You HAVE To write a 2nd Chapter to this,

You have great skill!!

Keep it up.

You write dialogue extremely well. And use of her book was a great vehicle to get to their sex. My only criticism would be that there was a little lack of description of the characters. Overall, well written and sexy!

I liked the way the story built up. Led me into lots of anticipation of the final act. I would have liked the final act to have been delayed till the sister came home and then a more thorough oral and fucking session. . Overall a great job.

I wonder how a 10 by 3 vibrator would have worked on her,.....she would have screamed for more!!!

Great story.

Lucky brother and this is a sister every growing boy should have.

Wild with a capital H for HOT.

Wow!!! I see so many scenarios to this, Like her girlfriends, marriage, babies, and so on. Keep going.

Well written just the way I like, not too graphic, somewhat plausible. Definitely love to see another installment . . . maybe since she begged him to come inside her, she later descides she want's brother's baby.

It had all the elements in the right places...Now curious about the new living arrangements!

I loved the fun and flirty nature of that story. I hope you continue it!

Awsome story. Reminds me of my relationship with my sister, best friend lovers. Post more when you have a chance.

Take care :)

Wow what a good story. I m so jealous. Keep up the good work.

I hope you continue this, it is an awesome read

Please write more!!!!!

One of the best I have read yet. Keeps you interested

I don't usually comment but it's an awesome well written story!

Your writting is very good, love the story, and it kept me on edge. Keep it going.

LOVED IT... SENSUAL,ROMANTIC,VERY EROTIC... I SOAKED MY PANTIES HALFWAY THROUGH FROM THE ANTICIPATION ALONE... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

but "sis" needs a lil more character. Great story that kept me hard

Led

part 2 please

More and more of this please and soon

You absolutely have to add another or two parts to this story. 5++

Fantastic. Thank you.

please right more like this! bro sis is such a turn on and to have all the fun teasing and playfulness before the actions was perfect!!!!

Great read. Good story, truly plausible characters, and great action. Hoping for more!

A super storyline that needs a second chapter.

Now that they have the ground rules set, we need to read how they lived together.

I'm sure that they didn't have too much free time on their hands because they would be so busy fucking each other half to death.

Thanks for the read.

This story really turned me on, really...

"Fine. You can go ahead and fuck me if you want. I guess it would have happened eventually." wow, what a "hopeless romantic" lol, I'm sure this guy will have fun becoming his sisters new dildo but I'm getting so bored of these 2-3 pages depth-less stroke stories. very well written and plausible though so i guess i am just in a pissy mood lol. 5 stars.

Great story sad it had to end!

Wish it was longer

sequel please

Another awesome story from a great author. Can't wait to see what's next. Keep em comimg.

I liked the way the plot line built to the finally. The new rules were a bonus. I liked how it played out.

loved the story

I have to give you credit for writing such a hot story, and I do emphasize the word "hot". You've got to come up with a sequel. Courtney is one hot girl; and I'd bang the s**t out of her in a New York minute!!!

You are by far my favorite writer on here. Keep them coming!!!

Just have to agree with all the lucky folk who read this before me.

They said it all.

Aside from a few grammatical/syntax errors, it was a nice story. there were some awkward parts where the words didnt seem to flow right but on a whole, good story.

This was a nice situational story and an erotic end. Personally, I would have preferred it if after the finding of the book, there was'nt a direct discussion about it but a slower buildup of the tension leading up to boundaries being crossed and the actual act. Good story!

Thank you for the erotic read!

That was so vivid an account that I am seeping pre-cum from my rod! You have written well!! I must read some more.

Leo - from Australia.

The hottest bro/sis story I've ever read.

I was turned on when she decided to keep brother's seed in her pussy. I would love to read about her having his baby.

That was one of the very best incest stories i have ever read. Please write another with the same characters. I feel there is some more fun to be had with those two.

Best story by far it really turned me on good job

This story is so HOT !! Got me so hard and was well written !! I think we Have to Know what they do next ??

Thank you ............ your stories are all very good.

What the hell you doing man!!! Damn hot story...I like it

I agree with OCTOBRAIN nock her up could use a few more chapters.

Great story. As others have said, I hope that there's more to come.

It is however taboo. Big sister should demand little bro cleans her up as well. You have a good size......collection of stories i'll try another genre.

I felt it was rushed at the end but nevertheless it was a good read

I agree with the last critique... it appeared rushed and unfinished. The storyline and characters developed rather well I to purr in the reader. Its goof to keep the reader wanting more... but that story is too good to leave hanging as it is.

I reckon the story was the right size and the right pace for me. The love scenes were not over dramatized. I loved it. THANK YOU.

please continue this story I loved is so much and had the best orgasim of my life reading and jerking off to this please make another story continuing with these 2

Really Hot. I wish to have a sister like her!

A story this good cannot be left there.

Great story. I want a chapter two though. I have to admit to myself searching through my older sisters room when I was visiting her. She had a porno mag with a centre spread of anal sex and bondage. She also had just the one sex toy. A purple cock shaped vibrator maybe seven or eight inches long including the dial. I'd never seen anything like it. It was the first of five times that I stripped off and masturbated on her bed reading her porn and once even wanking with a pair of her underwear. Two of the times I sucked the vibrator while picturing where it had been.

I appreciate the time spent on developing their relationship. I hope that there will be more of this young couple.

No need for a sequel, this was an amazing story and left enough closure, and a little more to imagine.

You are the best writer on here! Your stories are awesome! I have never been so turned on and have cum so hard to stories before. I would pay you to write me brother and sister stories! So fucking hot!!!

Your story was such a turn on i ended up sneaking in to my moms and sisters rooms to use there toys and jerk off portending i was fucking them

This is a great story and reads like it could be chapter 2 of 10, you should consider adding more.

I was wondering why they were using the vibrator when he had a rock hard cock just begging to be buried in one of his sisters holes. Good story.

Great story, My older sister and I are in an incestous relationship in real life and have been for about ten years. She is the best fuck I have ever had and she says the same about me. We have both been married but now we live together as husband and wife. She also gave me the best gift of all when she told me she was into beastiality and now her two labs are a major part of our sex life. Life is great.

Loved it and yes I am hard.

I would love to see a sequel to this story

Courtney was FANTASTIC AND AWESOME and deserved 5+STARS

Her brother was a real DICK HEAD.

He does not deserve a beautiful, sweet pussy.

Wish I had a sister like Courtney.

Great start to a series. Would have liked to have had more of a build up to the lovemaking.

Fantastic

This is the 3rd story from HeyAll that I really enjoyed

Enjoyed it. Got a rise out of me.

Pretty good, but, really, the sister saved the story.

The only real problem was that the brother immediately said the first thing that came into his mind, and did the first thing that occurred to him, even if it was obnoxious.

Good! It’s nice to read a story where the topic of incest is treated in a rational and even positive manner. All too often, it is treated like the plague, or it is something worse than cancer.

I doubt anyone thinks masturbating is better than sex. So, if they are both taking care of themselves at night, why not get together and turn up the satisfaction dial? Naturally, both must agree AND proper birth control is essential. And of course, complete confidentiality is a must!

The last thing anyone wants to read is something about their activities on social media.

You have 273 stories, and I may have read you before. But I am definitely going to check out your story list. Good enough that I would like to read more of your efforts.

Al

Loved it - Wish I had a sister

Great story! You really put the whole idea of love and incest together! Hope to read more of your work!

Couldn't believe that she was going to send him to his room to jerk his own load!

Shame the Brother didn't lick & LOVINGLY kiss her Vulva or shaven/ waxed hairless Smooth pussy! Or her vaginal lips !!

From Rebecca1

Sisters and brothers, together, making love like this...I love it, and wish my sister had been open to a relationship between us!! She was cute, very sexy body...dark pubes, the way I like them...she thinks she is better than me...her loss!!

More of these two would be quite nice, and more than welcome!

Five Stars...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I really enjoyed the story. The frank conversations about the erotic stories between brother and sister were the best part.

very good