All Comments on 'Howl with Me Ch. 01'

by BeccaLovesWolves

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good Start

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Write more please!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
curious...

Good start, interested to read more.

BatmanChickBatmanChickabout 11 years ago
good start

I do hope you write more. You may also like to look into getting an editor. It sometimes helps to have someone else read it before you post.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I love wolves too :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More

Very good start please continue

Butterflies1974Butterflies1974about 11 years ago
Waiting

Looking forward to the next chapter. This was very teasing to start us out. :)

IpFc22IpFc22about 11 years ago
I really liked it!

Please continue with HWM Ch. 02!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I love it, but I hope they get longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great start

great start more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good

..Start

Looking fwd to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

atleast he hasnt gone to her place and broken down the door like some stories. i also hope the guy she was with is just a friend or relative and not a romantic thing. breaking up a relationship to get her is just a fucked up thing.

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaabout 11 years ago
Good start

Very good start,it would be nice if they are a bit longer in the next chapters,look forward to more from you,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good Start

Really like the start of this story. Hope I don't have to wait to long for the second part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great start to a story

Keep writing dont let anyone tell you differrent

Speedy1106Speedy1106about 11 years ago
Nice

Hey, nice start can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
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WOW AMAZING START

fefe428fefe428about 11 years ago
Good Start!!!

This was a good start. I'm intrigued. Something tells me those people weren't bitten by wild dogs though! I hope you keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

awww soo sweet Daniel......hmmmmmm........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
need more!

My title says it all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great start.....

Its a great start you have me hook, I cant wait to read more it show some great potential I really hope you continue with this story cant wait to see were you take this .....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Good start :) Must admit I got confused with some of the story line - Daniel was walking home AND rode his motorbike home. Need proof reading before submit your story ok? Other than that, keep up with the good work

maxd01maxd01almost 11 years ago
Interesting read

One thing I notices is that there were a few tenses that were wrong, used a past tense when you should have used present, that sort of thing but otherwise interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Love it!!!!

I love these kinds of stories! A little build up before you really get into it:D I hope you get enough good comments on this to write lots more! Don't be like those people who start a good story and just quit on it. Whether people like it or not you should keep writing! Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good start, but.....

The story started with him walking home from work, then he conveniently had a motorcycle parked outside the diner where he followed his mate... He is the alpha, but he works a job where he can wear jeans? And his brother is taking care of pack paperwork, not the alpha? Hopefully these inconsistencies will be answered in the next few chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Question

Is the Vyrus a real bike?

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