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by Anonymous

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by cowboy200509/18/13

Wonderful series!!!!!

I have read the entire series, so far, and loved every moment of it. Your new ideas are fantastic. I love the idea of the Grandmother and other family members joining in the fun. Please don't stop now!!! You're a wonderful writer and I love your family love story series.

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by Anonymous09/21/13

Awesome!

Loved the twist and turns through the whole series. Not just a wank story, but one with a flow and feel of completeness.

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by Hellfire2309/22/13

Consequences

Cutis's dad is in for on hell of a shock when everybody gets home. He will find out his son is married to a celebrity girlfriend he didn't know Curtis had. Also that his wife is now in a submissive relationship with another woman.

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by homerjay10/05/13

if it's not too late

How about the orgy but with more family, male and female? Over Christmas.

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by Anonymous10/06/13

New chapter

I think what mom knows fucks her in white would be great and more fun at Miranda's exs expense

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by Anonymous10/07/13

Whatever the fuck you decide to write about, please do not bring another dude into the mix. That always kills the fun and the mood.
Oh, and thanks for this awesome fucking series!

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by Anonymous10/17/13

Eagerly and Patiently

Waiting for the next chap

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by Anonymous10/20/13

Here's hoping....

... for many more chapters in this series.

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by Anonymous11/06/13

Ideas?

As far as I'm concerned, you don't need any input from the peanut gallery, you're doing just fine on your own. In fact, I'd have given you a lot more than five stars if I was able to. The only way it could be better would be to insinuate myself into the real life of this "documentary"..... ;-)

Keep writing.......

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by Anonymous11/11/13

Have a white wedding of sluts in there pecking order. Have Curtis and Miranda put a fucking on Ellie so she understands her place and surrenders to them
Have Alexis seduce her sister and offer as a wedding present to Curtis and Miranda for there honeymoon

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by Anonymous11/12/13

Really

You're good writer and there are no need for readers approval. Pick one by yourself and surprise us. Just keep the story straight, do not stray away from roots. Thank You.

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Part six in this series is coming soon...

Hi all...
Thanks for your many comments and e- mails...

The next part...what mom knows fucks her in white is done and sent to the editors...it will be released in December or January...

Thanks to all who have helped make this one of my most popular series...

Jasmine

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by rouslarf11/19/13

Good Story

I chose to write my comment after reading all the chapters so I could get a good read on the whole story. Loved this story very much and as other readers have stated, you are doing amasingly writing with out any ideas from anyone else. You readers want more about this story. Please keep writing!!!

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by Anonymous11/21/13

What can I say GREAT STORY

One of the all time best Just keep your chapters going true to the first and it will be fantastic
GOOD JOB

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by Pulsifer4211/24/13

I am aghast at this entire story's excellence

EXTRAORDINARY !!!

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by TacoMann12/08/13

A perfect 10

All parts of this story are a perfect 10,and any one of the story ideas you want us to pick from are good ones.You should continue with it as far as you can take it.

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by camr465612/23/13

Absolutely Fantastic!!!

These stories (through Vegas) are absolutely fantastic and wonderfully written. You not only have beautiful legs but you have a brain that does fantastically well too!! Please, oh pretty please, keep up the wonderfully good work!! Thank you.

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by Anonymous12/31/13

Excelent

Really enjoyed the whole series. Think all of the proposed story ideas sound good.... :)

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by Anonymous05/04/14

Brilliant!!!

Absolutely brilliant story and series for that matter. All of those ideas sound amazing, don't forget to throw in Kristina into the mix somehow!!

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by Bfreetorun06/18/14

I am enjoying this series just as you are doing it. Keep up the good work.

Just don't let Alexis get Mastery of Alexis. I would not go for that. Just so she accepts the status quo without not trying to get over on Curtis. I accept that Alexis loves Ellie but she must be allowed to share with Curtis or it is not good. And if Dad was working with Ellie to screw Alexis some way let's hear about that and get him straightened out. There is a lot of good stuff coming out of this story, of course, my favorite is the love between Alexis and Curtis. Good luck on Curtis coming marriage, too. Thank you for writing.

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by rightbank07/05/14

you said it earlier

when talking about teenage boys, it goes from one extreme to another.
I fear you are trying to hard for the shock factor you have them talk about and forgot to tell a story that could actually happen.
two thumbs down

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by Anonymous07/27/14

Alexis AND Ellie have Curtis' children

Great set of stories. I have an incestuous relationship with my mom. Something we never speak of, we just do, often! It started with her being drunk and 'offering' herself to me when I was, how should I put it..., not of age? It made me a completely different man (dare I say so young a man?) in a matter of months, I remember being shocked at what was immediately no longer important to me, (sports and cars). I was immediately interested in fucking the shit out of my gorgeous gal (mom). Other mom's noticed. I noticed who noticed me, and I was a bad boy/man... But our relationship allows my parents to stay happily married. Though I had been labeled a momma's boy from an early age, if you saw my stunning blonde mother, you would, like everyone else, understand. Even though I have been black belted in Tang-Soo-Do, from my teens, I don't mind being labeled a momma's boy AT ALL, (jealous bastards!) Because my mom was (and still is, in her fifties) the hottest, sexiest woman alive. Dad knows now also, but also don't talk about it. Its 'quietly understood' by all. I have my mother whenever I want and dad gets to golf..., a lot! My wife has grown used to our liberal clothing policy and recently started her own nudism around my mom and I. My (many years younger love child) little sis/daughter never wears clothes. Our relationship IS possible..., ours and others like our relationships DO exist, and, of course, we know how to keep it demure...

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by Anonymous12/04/14

the series

Your series iv loved it I think you should make all the described I'll read all of them I have that relationship with my sister and I love it

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by Diesel6312/14/14

WOW

It's currently 6:00am and i have not gone to sleep yet this series is absoloutly outstanding!!! Keep up the great work.

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by Anonymous01/20/15

Sediment?!

Please look up the definition of 'sediment' then go back and replace it in your text with 'sentiment'.

Thanks,

JP

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by Anonymous02/28/15

fuck yes

Please continue with all your options

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by agamotto03/15/15

Wonderful series,

I like ALL your ideas, please try them all, each and every one!

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by Anonymous04/15/15

great stories

i would love to read what mom knows fucks her sister

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by Anonymous05/24/15

Absolutely WOW!!

Great story, well written, and had my cock hard the entire time. Decadently delicious having the bride submit to both pussy and cock just before walking down the aisle!

My only disappointment was that Miranda didn't dress Ellie as a slut after Miranda won the bet about having Dana eat her pussy, at least not that I read.

Hopefully you'll have Curtis getting all his sluts pregnant, especially Ellie ;-)

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by Anonymous07/03/15

Keep It Cumming!!

Keep the story going. All your ideas sound fantastic. I'm waiting for the next one!!!

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by Anonymous09/09/15

A Bob???

A women with a bob hair style is NEVER sexy, just fuck a boy then...

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by Anonymous10/14/15

too bad

Guess'n I'm in the minority. I don't care. Your series was both exciting and dissapointing at the same time. It is clear (to me anyway) that Ellie doesn't really and truly love Alexis. She wishes to Dominate her, flaunt her, take sexual advantage of her, get her pussy eaten with her own personal pussy pleaser, steal her life and family away from her. She's pissed and her pride is hurt that Alexis chose Ted over her. She has no scruples in that she has no problem breaking up a home even if it is in trouble. She should leave husband and wife alone to make their own decisions their own way. She wishes to humiliate and punish Alexis for thinking for herself simply because of her very own power trip and self-absorption. She thinks little of anyone's feelings but her own. You've written a character who is caught between a largely loveless mariage and a wanna be Mistress who has the scruples of a mafia Don. Alexis has to go through all of this convoluted morass just to get the compromise out of Ellie that they can have a life together if Ellie doesn't try to exclude her son. Ellie would have taken ALL of Alexis' life away from her just to possess her. Not Love her - possess her like chattel! At the end she says she loves Alexis, but she clearly does not. If she'd just said so earlier, Alexis would have run into her arms. Alexis wants to be Dommed by her and to please Ellie, true, but all Ellie would have had to do would have been to also let Alexis know that she loved her too would have been enough. She doesn't have to be a total bitch that uses people to be a strong woman. Don't write anymore. You dissapoint me.

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by Kookaburra811/11/15

Absolutely fantastic story

Love the story so far but I despise one of your characters Elli. Your asking us for ideas to continue with this story.Seems this story is more and more into Dom /Sub an Incest . Your ideas are good but try this for one , Curtis older sister a nurse is coming back home for Xmas after 3 year away in a refugee camp somewhere in Asia or the Middle East . Curtis gets to bang her with help from mummy and Miranda for xmas, yummy more incest and becomes his Sub.Curtis gives that bitch Elli a belly full of arms and legs better still twins ( twice the pain ) after a New Year Eve Orgy.....that's covers xmas another character and the orgy that you suggested , just wishful thinking I know , but you did ask....

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by Anonymous12/10/15

Awesome Sauce!

You series was fucking awesome!! I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. 😍😍😍

Ian anonymous now, but I will sign up to be a member.

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by bunky2801/06/16

fantastic

I loved this story, it kept my interest from start to the very end. I hope that you continue the plot , maybe even get Miranda`s old boyfriend and new wife join in with a few toys involved. Also keep Ellie involved with Curtis and his mom.
Thank You, keep writing :o))

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by Anonymous03/06/16

Fhttps://m.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=57711024911 2329&id=185381768285181&set=a.185383301618361.1073 741828.185381768285181&source=48&refid=13&_ft_=qid.6 258276656908913495%3Amf_story_key.-374395834873343 487ucked. Up

I don't like the way it ended. It makes Curtis mom out to be in love with Ellie and she wins her. I don't think Elloe loves her it's just the one that got away deal. Curtis mom is weak than again if. You are going to write more this might be part of the plan to suck Ellie in and asap drop her move in with Curtis and Miranda. I do hope this is just a plan to put Ellie at ease so she will lower her guard and they can and will kick her to the curb.

Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous07/20/16

Amazing writing skils

I have to say that your story is the first multi-part story that I have read to completion! It is extremely well thought out and written. Like any good story or book, it keeps you interested and wanting to find out what happens next. I do hope you continue this story line as I know I am not alone in wanting to read more.
Based on your future story development ideas here are my favorites:
What Mom Knows Fucks Her in White
What Mom Knows Fucks Her Sister
Or how about a story describing how Ellie slowly becomes more of a willing submissive to Curtis
Or how Miranda's ex & his new wife both become fully (or reluctantly) submissive to Curtis and Miranda.

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by crewdawg08/29/16

Damn you know how to write a great story. I loved it!

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by blackknight31401/11/17

that's a good question...

There seems to be an awful lot of pretty dominant submissives in the story... just saying.
Orgy is a bad idea.
Adding family members works for me but keep the groups to a max of 4.
I understand that Ted is a douche, but I think Brittany just got used to punish him, I think she is one more non family member that could be brought into the fold.
Ted... maybe he has a second family, explaining his lack of interest in the core family of the story. Fuck over him or keep him in the story works for me.
I am loving the story so far but it could get redundant vary easily from here on out... be careful.

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by Hurricane00702/14/17

Would love to read the wedding dress version

Shopping for a dress combined w whatever condition Alexis comes up with like a illegal marriage would be spectacular

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by Anonymous02/27/17

Fucking horny

Omg I love your stories and we share the same name Hehe this shit be having men get many orgasms keep it up love

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