What Mom Knows Fucks Her In Vegas

Great Story!!!!

Thanks for another great story.
love and best wishes.
keep writing..



N.B.- Soory for any Tpyo, I am tpying one-handedly..

AMAZING

This is truly my favorite series, I definately like the idea of them returning to the wedding after getting married. I also like all the other ideas too but having Brittany submit on her wedding day tops it for me

Great Story

Loved the way you brought them all together and I like all your suggestions for future stories can't wait. I would just like more between mom and son and Miranda

Loved this well written story, but I think the man hating in it is going a bit overboard! Curtis is basicall helping his mom fuck over his dad! We should all be so lucky to have such a hell spawn for a child! It is a hot story though!

pregnancy

Have him get his mom pregnant

Love your work

I can't wait for more!!! Love all the ideas except the orgy. It's just not intimate enough like the ones where Miranda shares her man with women in a loving and mutual way. Ironic, I know, in the context, but I like what I like.

Keep writing!

fantastic! Couldn't stop reading! Love how wet each chapter has made me! Cannot WAIT for the next!

What a Gift

Jasmine you have a real gift in your writing ability and being able to develop a very complex but always riveting story. All of your ideas for further developing this series are great. Can't wait for the next installment. Thanks for your entertaining "submissions." The stocking fetish continues to entrance me. lol

Excellent!

I thoroughly enjoy reading your stories, I haven't finished reading all your stories/series yet, but this series is a great one.

From the plot ideas, I think the way you listed them is the way it should follow, in sequence.

1 - What Mom Knows Fucks Her in White

2 - What Mom Knows Fucks Her Mom --- Plot Idea: Alexis' Mom turns up for Christmas, either bursts in on them going at it as she arrives, or not long afterwards, mom & son, or mom & Miranda.

3 - What Mom Knows Fucks Her Sister --- Plot Idea: While either Alexis, her son, Miranda, or Alexis's mom are getting down to it, Alexis' sister walks through the door a few hours early. Some of the family were due to go collect her sister from the (Train Station / Airport / etc) in a few hours time, but the sister arrives early, to surpise her sister & family, but instead she stumbles into just some of the goings on, to then later find out the full extent of what has been happening with her family.

4 - What Mom Knows is a full-fledged Orgy

In the following order:

Fucks her in white followed by Fucks her sister followed by Fucks her mom makes the most sense to me(as long as we're voting, don't make the grandma the old droopy breasted type I hate when authors do that.) Full fledged orgy would be interesting, I just don't know how you would fit it into the time line. Maybe between Sister and Mom. Another commenter mentioned getting his mom pregnant (impregnation in erotica can go one of two ways but based on your work so far I think you wouldn't disappoint) and while that's a good idea as lovey as they all are I imagine that would be more of an end game maneuver - they all live happily ever after once he has impregnated his mom and most likely Miranda. Hell Ellie too why not? Then you could do a time jump to What the Kids Don't Know Fucks Them.

This is a really great series definitely keep it going with SOMETHING even if it's not my suggestion or anything listed here.

All of the above.

All of the above!

Please Jasmine, keep on writing! I just love this series and want more, more, more.
Keep the order you listed, maybe adding the submitted suggestion of children and continuing on. Perhaps you could expand it to include other friends, family, and co-workers as they raise their children. Perhaps a yearly orgy celebrating all of their relationships while they wait for the children to turn 18.

All the Above

All your ideas are great. Just remember Curtis is in ultimate control, with all the actors mentioned as well the on-going relationship with Brittany.

Kristina

You have to weave chocolate Kristina in, with Alexis

hot

all of them when you have the time the whole set is hot

Awesome as usual!

Hey Jasmine! I love following and reading this series. It's the best I've seen so far since I first started reading stories on Literotica. Your writing style seems to pull me right in. I am always in a perpetual state of want to read more and more from you in not only in this series and in your other stories as well. Keep up the great work!!! I look forward to the next chapter too. Cheers!

I vote for all of the above

I really enjoyed the story that you're telling and to be honest, I'll pretty much love to read all the stories you'll publish for this fantastic series

My only request though would be for you keep Curtis the main character, as the only male lead in the series, he's funny, witty, loving and caring

I'd love to see a good harem

Well worth the wait.....

As far as the next chapter goes, I don't want to see an orgy. Many a great story has been ruined by bringing group sexy. At the core of this story is a love story. When loved ones get passed around like sex toys, for me, that destroys everything. Adding sex partners is fine, just don't lose sight of the amazing bond bertween Curtis and his mom, or the deep love between Curtis and Miranda. The three way with them was very erotic. As far as the plot line, it's best left to the professional that has been spectacular to this point.

Thanks for another amazing chapter!

Fun

This is a fun story. I just jumped in when I saw the chapter today....but did read from the beginning. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks

No orgy is necessary.

Nix on the orgy idea, at least until the final end. Not too sure on going back to the wedding reception/party. Only if could get Mark & Brittany alone with Alexies, Ellie, Miranda, and Curtis to cuckold Mark.
My vote is for definitely letting Alexis' mother know how slutty her daughter is.
Then do a follow-up where the mother seduces Alexis sister and neice, then invites Alexis,et al. for a get-to-gether.

grewt so far

this is a wonderful story line. I think you should make sure Curtis becomes the real Dom over all the women and since this is about love more than the sex i would forget the orgy as to unloving. enjoyed most of your stories>

Keep doing what youre doing.

Story is great. You chose the direction.

Excellent!

I loved this chapter as much as I have the others. I eagerly look forward to more!

Curtis has Chocolate ?

Not sure about Miranda going to the reception in a wedding dress of her own but going there and having Kristina sucomb to Miranda there would be a good wedding present to Curtis. Just a thought. I would stay away from the full fledged orgy scenenerio as would be a little far fetched i would think (but thats only my opinion). Loved this chapter and the twist with Curtis taking Brittnay in the ass.

Curtis Dom Over the Girls

I enjoy reading this series very much. It is well thought out and good character details. I would go in the direction of What Mom Knows Fucks Her in White with a couple of more twists. Have Curtis become Dom over his Mom, Miranda, and Ellie, bring Brittany under his and the girls control, and a real twist move into a house where the girls and him live together. This would bring Ellie more under his control. She agreed to having Alexis and her living together but they never discussed where. Whatever you decide, we will continue to enjoy your story. :)

Please carry on writing these amazing chapters

Next Parts

If I remember correctly, the main character is supposed to have a sister, right? If I'm not mistaken, wouldn't it be interesting for her to find out about the relationship between her brother and her mother? Just another possibility. Also, seeing them all get married, then back to the ex's wedding would be very interesting!!

awsome!!!

i like all the ideas, you are a gifted writer

Next Story

Of them suggestions my favourite two would be the marriage and the new years orgy and probably my least favourite would be the one involving Alexis' mum.

You are an awesome writer, probably my favourite and I havent come across many of your stories I dont love

great story

Very well written story, all of them!
I like the future story line possibilities, especially as sisters, aunts and even grandmothers get involved.

Please keep up the good work!

White, then Mom and/or Sis

I had this idea for it.

After the Vegas wedding, they have a proper reception back home, and invite the family. Alexis' mother and/or sister swing by, maybe Curtis's sister comes as well.

I'll let you decide how it happens though.

next chapter

I loved this series I think the next chapter should be about Miranda and Curtis getting married and have his aunt come to the wedding and Elle become under Curtis total control and more surprises and maybe Miranda has a sister

It is just a suggestion

I want to see the wedding.

no orgies

The sister and her daughter would be amazing!

Add another chapter.

Add another chapter. Just his time having it with Charles and Miranda's wedding with him fucking all te brides maids. And then havin him show his father who's the real man in his moms life

I know that this is just a story BUT I would really like it if Mom...

...enjoyed her times with Ellie and was not a complete submissive getting a lot of punishment. The Dom/Sub stuff is not really my scene, I have always survived on being just what I am, dominant is a calm and caring way,no slave stuff, no Master this and that. But, I do read for entertainbment and hate it when a Dom is cruel to her pet. I usually skip these type of stories but this was so good that after I got into it I just had to finish them. Good reading.

no orgy

I like the wedding idea for the next part, however it seams weird that Alexis would marry her son. it would make much more sense if she married Ellie. I like the idea of the younger sister not older. Alexis could maybe dominate her younger sister and her niece? the younger sister and her daughter could move in with alexis because her husband cheated on her and she needs a place to stay. the next part of the story could be that their mom comes for a surprise visit and walks in on all of them and tells them all how her family was also incest. thats just my idea.

awsome chapter

i loved this story, i can't wait till the wedding.

Evil slutty trash that is the absolute best of its type

The author of this story is an evil crazy genius with writing skills that go thru the roof. This story is erotic and hilarious and dramatic just completely jam packed and needs to be read twice to absorb the unbelievable scenarios. Although, My sanity is not without question I loved this story. It even has dramatic romance and intense love. Bizarre revenge humiliation and sodomy that would make the devil himself blush.

add several more chapters

I would love to see all those ideas in several chapters!!!!!!

I like the idea of fucking her in white. Outstanding series so far!

Fantastic. Don't want it to end, lol.

Love to hear more of Curtis and Ellie making out. Maybe her accepting him as her master. Just a weird idea! Please publish more chapters. Thanks again.

Awesome

These are great I hope you keep up the writing I've really liked most of your stories not just this series.

Great Stories

I love this series and truly hope that it continues. As for the ideas for continuation I anxiously look forward to reading In White and her sister.

amazing

i would love to see some more of Curtis and Miranda

nice

hope u continue soon, story was rly good so far, would love to read What Mom Knows Fucks Her in White, and to have ellie submit deeper, all in all more romance like this end

The Best Ever

I have been reading stuff here for a long time and this is without a doubt the best ever. Well planned story of how some relationships get started and then you followed through with a great chain of events. Hope you can continue with more of the same.

What a chapter

Great chapter.

I would like to see Curtis seduce and dominate a woman on his own. His mother was Ellie's sub and he didn't really seduce her but took advantage of an upportinity (and she was the one to initiate it). Mianda was offered by his mom and Brittany by Ellie.
It would be nice to see him seduce his grandmother for example. She would learn about the divorce and moving in with Ellie and would fight with Alexis about it and be hurtful. Curtis seeing his mom hurt like that would want to show how good it feel to be a sub to his grandma. It works also with his aunt instead.

Loved it! 5 stars...

As to this and the preceding chapters, they need some editing. Chapter 3 ends with you sending readers to this chapter, instead of "In the Air." The last two chapters also need some editing since you have Curtis and Miranda saying "I love you" to each other for the first time, twice. Oh, and don't forget the spell check is your worst enemy. You have many misspelled words that weren't caught because they formed other words.

As for where to go next? Forget Christmas and New Years for now. Plenty of time for that later, maybe in time for the Christmas contest. Finish up in Vegas with Miranda and Curtis getting hitched and fucking with Brittany and Mark some more, figuratively and literally, if you want. Don't have Ellie and Alexis get "hitched" until after a confrontation/bombshell-dropping with Ted.

Some thoughts for this or later chapters:

"Hey Dad! Meet my wife. Oh, and Mom is leaving you." How does Ted deal? Does he take it like a man or like a bitch? Does he already have something on the side?
Does Curtis help Ted through this period? Is there someway to make Bitch Brittany a consolation prize for Ted, all without Mark knowing? What is Ted told about how his life fell apart? Is it done in pieces or all at once? Will Ted ever know his son really did a number on him?

How about Alexis wants Curtis more in her new life with Ellie? Makes sense to me. Let's say Alexis sneaks Curtis into their bedroom to eat Ellie awake which could lead to a nice slow, thoughtful screw, perhaps? Maybe some pile driving? Maybe do something with the new family dynamic, with Ellie as "step-mom" and Curtis as "step-son." Maybe they both like baseball? Shit, I don't know.

Let's see. The orgy: bad idea unless it is taken care of in Vegas. The Halloween crew suddenly fucking each other after how many years getting together? Doesn't sound realistic.

So G-Ma is a GMILF? Really? ... Really? Not interested.

Antie and cousin come to town? I have no ideas for this. I'd probably read it though. Kristina, a Latina, or an Asian? Whatever floats your boat. Just be careful you don't grow your story so much it is impossible to come to a final ending.

You have everybody hooked. You're now at a point where you shouldn't be worrying about out doing the previous chapter as an important of a goal.

Maybe you should be concentrating on what will happen at the end of this story and work backward from there. Or maybe you just need to keep it interesting and maybe story up your biggest ideas for the final chapter.

Think about the Empire Strikes Back. It was great because it didn't have a happy ending. Nothing went well for the Alliance, but it moved all the pieces on the board to where they needed to be for the true ending in the Return. Gold Bikini ==> Ewoks ==> Dead Emperor. Awesome!

Okay, I'm tired as hell and I don't know what kind of a point I'm trying to make. Let the force flow through you. Yeah.

You really need to take it to What Mom knows fucks her in White. I love this storyline and would love to see them get married.