if your writings are based on actual happenings in your life. Your female character sounds just like you, a blonde sensual woman. Maybe I should send you an email and pose this question. As for this latest segment, it has all the qualities of your previous work albeit having a few typos. Never the less, I gave it five stars.
Susan I love the detail you add, with what is going through the woman's mind throughout her incestuous encounter with her son, as well as his amazement to each advance in the love making. You are so very talented. Anxious for the next installment ... you always tease us and keep us waiting ...
and mommy's such a good teacher. I knew from the start this story was going to leave many men in smoldering ruin, and I now know it will exceed all expectations. It is so hot even the critics can't help but to overlook a few typos. I hope the screens do not overheat and flash and burn.
my screen shows that with only one view you already have garnered three comments and five favorites. Now that is what I call positive results. This is true check your screen!
I can't help wondering . . .
if your writings are based on actual happenings in your life. Your female character sounds just like you, a blonde sensual woman. Maybe I should send you an email and pose this question. As for this latest segment, it has all the qualities of your previous work albeit having a few typos. Never the less, I gave it five stars.
So Hot!!!
Susan I love the detail you add, with what is going through the woman's mind throughout her incestuous encounter with her son, as well as his amazement to each advance in the love making. You are so very talented. Anxious for the next installment ... you always tease us and keep us waiting ...
Hate the word..
I've always hated the word "cunt". The word itself sounds weird, dirty and nasty. Many other words would sound much better.
Oh.... Susan.... you are being so naughty,
and mommy's such a good teacher. I knew from the start this story was going to leave many men in smoldering ruin, and I now know it will exceed all expectations. It is so hot even the critics can't help but to overlook a few typos. I hope the screens do not overheat and flash and burn.
Statistical proof,
my screen shows that with only one view you already have garnered three comments and five favorites. Now that is what I call positive results. This is true check your screen!
Bravo!
Well-written and a delicious tempo! Love how Mommy directed him.
Fantastic, Susan, you write so well. Personally I like the word cunt, it's a good olde English word.
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