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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Excellent , rhymin' !!

5-ed .

DesejoDesejoabout 11 years ago
Very nice.

I like the repeating final lines.

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Nature Unbowed

That little bird teaches how we should live, eh? Never give in! I like this!

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
thrush, besides

being a bird, is the term applied to skin eruption and fever that signify HIV's initial infection as well as less serious yeast infections--is this a hidden meaning? or am I out on a tree limb?

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