We should all be lucky enough to have a mom who doesn't mind screwing her son or screwing him over! Regardless of the hot sex I don't think I'd be too happy getting lied to and screwed over by my mother but that's just me!?!?
I think this story would improve with a little more descriptiveness. Instead of saying "I climbed on top and rode him" add an adjective here and there and add in how it affected her and how she perceived her son. Like, "And I straddled my son, took hold of his throbbing cock and impaled myself on it. Oh, that felt so good! I perched atop him and looked down at his pleasure-twisted face with pride for a few moments, then started to rise and fall..." for example.
Got to agree with him. Getting screwed over by your mother like that? Talk about a buzz-kill. Should at least have been some tension there, something to build on and explore. Overall the story lacked detail, and sense of realism, and was just blah.
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Anonymous02/03/14
thank you
Thank you for the story. I know it's 'just' a made up story, but still a good read.
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Anonymous05/29/15
Okay
Needs more foreplay not such a abrupt approach as that. But all in all good story.
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Anonymous04/13/16
Oh fuck yea, so hot
Oh would love to join these three fuckers. But will will make do with acting out the story with my live in girl friends and any other two young cunts that are willing.
Cunt lapping sex maniac lanc's uk.
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Don't stop now
This story has a lot of possibilities.
We should all be lucky enough to have a mom who doesn't mind screwing her son or screwing him over! Regardless of the hot sex I don't think I'd be too happy getting lied to and screwed over by my mother but that's just me!?!?
Nice!
Nice little incestuous, bisexual threesome you've set up here Brett.
This 5 star start could be the beginning of some real fun times.
I think this story would improve with a little more descriptiveness. Instead of saying "I climbed on top and rode him" add an adjective here and there and add in how it affected her and how she perceived her son. Like, "And I straddled my son, took hold of his throbbing cock and impaled myself on it. Oh, that felt so good! I perched atop him and looked down at his pleasure-twisted face with pride for a few moments, then started to rise and fall..." for example.
Eh, it's nice.
It's okay, I guess. I'd prefer more explicit description, though. Additionally, some sentences and writing conventions need to be cleaned up.
Thanks***
For the read.
Agree with Anon
Got to agree with him. Getting screwed over by your mother like that? Talk about a buzz-kill. Should at least have been some tension there, something to build on and explore. Overall the story lacked detail, and sense of realism, and was just blah.
thank you
Thank you for the story. I know it's 'just' a made up story, but still a good read.
Okay
Needs more foreplay not such a abrupt approach as that. But all in all good story.
Oh fuck yea, so hot
Oh would love to join these three fuckers. But will will make do with acting out the story with my live in girl friends and any other two young cunts that are willing.
Cunt lapping sex maniac lanc's uk.
SEEMED ABRUPT
I'm just a stranger in a strange land of fiction.
All for that.
Hey, great story. I really dug it. The only thing that bothered me a bit was how abruptly you ended it, I would've drawn it out a bit more.
I loved it though it was a bit short. Mom/son threeways are so fucking hot!
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