Sharing My Son with My Girlfriend

Don't stop now

This story has a lot of possibilities.

We should all be lucky enough to have a mom who doesn't mind screwing her son or screwing him over! Regardless of the hot sex I don't think I'd be too happy getting lied to and screwed over by my mother but that's just me!?!?

Nice!

Nice little incestuous, bisexual threesome you've set up here Brett.
This 5 star start could be the beginning of some real fun times.

I think this story would improve with a little more descriptiveness. Instead of saying "I climbed on top and rode him" add an adjective here and there and add in how it affected her and how she perceived her son. Like, "And I straddled my son, took hold of his throbbing cock and impaled myself on it. Oh, that felt so good! I perched atop him and looked down at his pleasure-twisted face with pride for a few moments, then started to rise and fall..." for example.

Eh, it's nice.

It's okay, I guess. I'd prefer more explicit description, though. Additionally, some sentences and writing conventions need to be cleaned up.

Thanks***

For the read.

Agree with Anon

Got to agree with him. Getting screwed over by your mother like that? Talk about a buzz-kill. Should at least have been some tension there, something to build on and explore. Overall the story lacked detail, and sense of realism, and was just blah.

thank you

Thank you for the story. I know it's 'just' a made up story, but still a good read.