The Senior Center

Thank you

Another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

Nice, light, enjoyable story

I guess I would classify it as a lovely fantasy. I'm cynical....

Romance

Lovely story. Non-erotic, yes, but Romance would have been more appropriate.

Feelgood Factor

It's nice once in a while to read something that makes you feel warm inside.
My wife and I both enjoyed your story very much.We both hope that you will carry on writing in this vein.

DG Hear

Thank you for the nice comments. They are always appreciated. It makes a writer feel good when readers take the time to respond to a story. Even if sometimes they may be on the negative side. Oh! Happy Valentine's day to you.
With Respect
DG

What a great Story!

Thank You DG for another one of your best! I love your writing and look forward to what's next. You are the best. hodunk

Thanks DG

Thanks for a warm story about a romance between two ordinary people, who are satisfied with their lives, and not looking for the unattainable, Five stars

How nice!

This really moved well. Very good. A pleasure to read.

Thank you,
M1

"I love you too Grandpa"

Darn, must be some allergies going on here too.

DG you did a nice job of building the characters and their interpersonal relationships, especially between the older and younger generations. Really enjoyed this Valentines Day story.

Good Effort

Not perfect, a bit dry at times but it is much stronger than your other entries, therefore it gets the 5.

Watch the use of "I" to begin sequential sentences - it is somewhat grating to see it 3 or 4 times in a row.

Not a dry eye in the house

A damned good story, DG. Well told and with a better point than many.
HP

Nice very nice

Nice to read A good old fashion romantic story thanks

Wow...

Wonderful!!!!! 5*s

Very Heart Warming Story****

Thanks for sharing I like your style!!

Another 5 star submission!

Lotsa allergies around here too!

Heartwarming and enjoyable.
You could have based Ben's character on my own father...you have described him exactly as he was.
Thank you.
Five stars.

Priceless

I enjoyed reading a true believable story experience.

I admit, I cried for the sadness but also for the happiness that was expressed.

Continue your great work.

Success

Allergies in spring time are to be expected -

It is that time of year here LOL

Well done and totally believable - no big surprises but romance is not always about surprise but about people and happiness.

Need an industrial size bottle of Claritin

My allergies were in full bloom as I was reading this story. Another great piece of work. Thank you.

Short and Sweet

Nice story.

thanks for a great story

It is a welcome change to like the characters and read with a smile in my heart.

EXCELLENT WORK!

I didn't think those damn allergy bugs would be contagious over the internet . Pass the tissue, please