Another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
I guess I would classify it as a lovely fantasy. I'm cynical....
Lovely story. Non-erotic, yes, but Romance would have been more appropriate.
It's nice once in a while to read something that makes you feel warm inside.
My wife and I both enjoyed your story very much.We both hope that you will carry on writing in this vein.
Thank you for the nice comments. They are always appreciated. It makes a writer feel good when readers take the time to respond to a story. Even if sometimes they may be on the negative side. Oh! Happy Valentine's day to you.
Thank You DG for another one of your best! I love your writing and look forward to what's next. You are the best. hodunk
Thanks for a warm story about a romance between two ordinary people, who are satisfied with their lives, and not looking for the unattainable, Five stars
This really moved well. Very good. A pleasure to read.
Darn, must be some allergies going on here too.
DG you did a nice job of building the characters and their interpersonal relationships, especially between the older and younger generations. Really enjoyed this Valentines Day story.
Not perfect, a bit dry at times but it is much stronger than your other entries, therefore it gets the 5.
Watch the use of "I" to begin sequential sentences - it is somewhat grating to see it 3 or 4 times in a row.
A damned good story, DG. Well told and with a better point than many.
Nice to read A good old fashion romantic story thanks
Thanks for sharing I like your style!!
Lotsa allergies around here too!
Heartwarming and enjoyable.
You could have based Ben's character on my own father...you have described him exactly as he was.
I enjoyed reading a true believable story experience.
I admit, I cried for the sadness but also for the happiness that was expressed.
Continue your great work.
It is that time of year here LOL
Well done and totally believable - no big surprises but romance is not always about surprise but about people and happiness.
My allergies were in full bloom as I was reading this story. Another great piece of work. Thank you.
It is a welcome change to like the characters and read with a smile in my heart.
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