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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill02/05/13

Was really into this

until the third line ... kinda fell apart after that with cheezy rhyme and stumbling cadence. Great title, great idea. no vote

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by Mo_B_Dick02/06/13

I'll do to you

whatever it is I want to do. As always

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by Mo_B_Dick02/09/13

Just let me know when you're home...

And I'll spank the shit out of you on your daddy's bed.

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