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Overly Simplistic
The simple sentences, monosyllabic vocabulary and theme bludgeon of 'literotica story into actual event' didn't do it for me.
Ahhhhh
the excitement of anonymous, but hardcore sex. Very well written and begs for a follow.
Lee
Great story!
Sometimes a short story that sticks to the point is exactly what I need. Thanks!
amazing
please continue...
this story is so intriguing.. i love how it keeps you waiting but not to like a maddening point like with some stories..
Continue This Hot Encounter
Good story mate, keep writing this series with the next installment. I loved it being simple in writing, I write in a similar fashion for ease, but also to describe things. Maybe in the next installment, her secret admirer takes her whilst she's on a busy train, or when she's sitting on a busy bus. He can do a bit more to her perhaps.
Great work! :D
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