Don't Fuck MY Wife

File this under JPB WannaB Mangled Miscarriages

This author has wit, humor and originality, but hid these skills very well in relating this tale.

Loved it!

Title sz it all.

WHAT???

This was so bad it was good. This was so great it was horrible. It was easy to figure all the women were connected to Clayton. That makes this tale...

Damn

Laughing

I have not a clue what to say about this one.... I guess good luck...

Nice plotline

but the execution was a bit wooden and there were no suprises except for the motto that all women are seducible and thus the author may be labeled a misogynist! Excellent ideas..

OMG!!!!!

What a man! Bruce Willis and Sly Stallone have movie guns that shoot a millions rounds per second, but they are wimps compared to this cuck getting his revenge. And the trick ending!!!! Their hasn't been a spy novel published in the past 50 years as clever as this.

Sorry

You needn't have labeled them. I knew immediately who he was going after. I really don't understand how he thinks what he did balanced what she did. His cheating (and it was CHEATING) was cold and calculated. I do not mean to excuse what she did but he is a complete ass and no better, perhaps even a worse example of a man than Clayton. Honestly, Claire deserves much better than this prick.

You let the beast off the chain

The hero in this story became the villain.

I liked it

Could have used some polishing, but it was entertaining nonetheless. You wrote a wife as stupid (in the common sense department, anyway) as any that SS06 has ever come up with. Fun tale. High marks.

So many things wrong

What we have here is a failure of plot and common sense.

Jeremy is a male whore. Clayton did you wrong so you fuck three innocent women. Not all women are this immoral.

Claire is so stupid that this episode will happen again. She works in the real world and will have more male attention over time and if she is as susceptible as written then she will get drunk, get felt and get fucked again.

As Clayton knows all of Claire's information, it would not be hard to hunt her down. Then he can seek revenge against Jeremy. A revenge that will be more permanent than the pathetic one Jeremy has doled out.

All in all this story ended as a **.

NOt so good

I really don't like arrogant heroes, and especially ones that use the work 'seem' when they are bragging, but pretend to sound modest. Women seem to like me. No shit. Just say women like me. Seem works when it's clearly a misimpression, she seemed ready to fuck, but kissed me goodby at the door.

Frankly the story seemed mechanical. All this doing, and nothing witty, even remarkable. So haples, keep at it. Examine authors you enjoy, see how they build character and events. Writing's a skill that you have to develop.

Excellent story

Ignore the critics. No, fuck the critics!

This story would make a good movie.

anonymous-excellent story

The only ones that should be ignored is guys like you that think your opinion is the only one that counts. So to be frank, go fuck yourself.

I loved the payback. Wife needs a leash but so what.

I liked it!

I'm a girl who hates cheaters, and so seeing a guy get a big heap of vengeance for it does do my heart good :3

Easy if you are irresistible

This revenge is not transferable. It only works if you are a guy who (it seems) is absolutely irresistible. Of course, this revenge only needs to work if you are married to a woman who inspires serious lust, and whose beauty and sexual aura tempts bosses to take serious risks!

So he believes his wife didn't really do anything wrong

and didn't do anything to punish her because she was drunk and basically molested by her boss. But he still goes on to cheat on her with five different women and leave her completely open to retaliation by the piece of shit boss?

Here's a question: How exactly does blackmail work when a guy sees his wife, wife's family and daughter behaving like whores? The company can't fire him because he's in charge and that would be illegal even if they found out, and the first thing he's going to do is divorce and disown them, not talk to them about it.

I'm sure he'd appreciate the easily available evidence in court, courtesy of the dipshit husband. Honestly, the husband comes off as just the same kind of asshole as the boss. Not quite equable, as the boss is basically a rapist, but still, what the fuck? 3 stars for highly entertaining story, losing 1 for the broken plot and 1 for grandmother sex. Ugh.

Wow !

Quite the convoluted revenge story.

It is a good read, thanks

I hate stories where

the wife has the PERFECT body and/or completely flawless and in this case, has a higher than average sex drive AND a high IQ. If she was that perfect, why would she be with you, Joe average.


Throw in the sex with other women and all it seems is that your "hero" wasn't looking for revenge but simply a reason to fuck around on his wife.

Hopefully, you'll let her see what kind of a jackass she married and allow her to divorce him so she can find someone more her...equal.

And he risks giving his wife an STD! Yay!

Oh, wait, this is only fiction...

I gave it 3 stars ...

... for a stroke story it sillier than usual and not very hot. Keep trying, you'll get here.
Panther Fan.

Great description of a Psychopath :)

You really nailed it, your antihero is spot on as someone who wrecks peoples lives without a thought. Would have liked a bit more though on the revenge aspects? Julia divorced by Clayton, Samantha made pregnant and lose her college place, Millie publicly exposed? That would really have taught Clayton a lesson!

Claire however isn't really believable, as she is meant to be intelligent. The story would be better if she was a bit more of a skank and bimbo, which she would really have to be to be able to stomach living with Jeremy.

Minor quibbles though, well done!

I understand the desire for revenge and even fucking the guys wife. However, it is a bit odd that he had no qualms about fucking all these women. No matter the reason, it was cheating. His wife was honest and immediately confessed. That says a lot about her character. Obviously, he has no intention of ever telling her.

LOL OWNAGE

What a legend. A bit overload but best revenge ever. 5 stars thumbsup.

What a fucking narcissistic bastard! Your revenge that you plotted for him was so over the top that everyone lost respect for him in the process! I could understand doing the wife as turn about is fair play but to knowingly try to fuck up these other ladies lives is just wrong in so many ways!

Good Read***

You really Bopped around with this story. Good read.

over the top revenge

This is the kind of revenge that should be mandatory reading for all males in an effort to warn them if the potential consequence of messing with a married woman. Predators of married woman should not be spared any revenge. Some men would not be so nonviolent in their approach, Clayton got a free pass in my humble opinion. Some people especially with managerial positions abuse their power and they should be prepared to pay the piper. Workplace sexual abuse is usually enforced in larger more professional organizations. Lawsuits are the real deterrent to put management on its toes to set the stage for workplace appropriate behavior. Great story and revenge.

So it's ok to shoot people, but emotional pain isn't?

I liked this story. The boss messed with the most important woman in his life so he messed with ALL the women in the boss' life. He didn't kill anyone. He was cautious about rammifications (birth control, threats to keep the DVD quite so divorces didn't occur, etc) and he and his wife were able to learn and move on.

This also had the added benefit of evening the scales and perhaps punishing Claire (a little bit atleast since she'll always wonder what he did and she'll imagine far worse then he really did) for being a fucking moron. I've known a LOT of really smart people who have ZERO common sense, so I could see a woman like Claire falling for shit like this.

What amazes me is the vitriol in the comments about the anti-hero and his chosen path for justice. Seriously? It's better to kill a guy than fuck his women? One uses the best tools one has to do what one can. This characters best tools were seduction.

a great lesson for predators

all women in his family are open too be fucked.

2nd reading

I liked this fantasy revenge plot, and thought it could well have been one of my favorites. Yes, completely improbable in reality, the aftermath and consequences never enter in. But that wasn't the point, was it? I read it like, here is a guy who finds out his wife cheated, and thinks "how can I really stick it to this guy?" So over beers at the bar, he envisions how this revenge might go. Insert existing story as fantasy sequence. Then for the epilogue, he goes back to Claire, asks her to quit the company and file the sex harrasment charges, then they move away and move on. The tag at the end is fantasy is better than reality, and he never really can trust her again. But, yeah, fucking his mom, really? I bet it would really piss Clayton off, but none of the sex with his female relatives would get him to change his ways. Only draining his bank account, and ruining him professionally will get him to learn he can't get away with being a predator. And if that didn;t work, there is always the extreme revenge violence of so many other stories on here. I mentioned the 2nd read, because once you stop taking this story seriously, and look for the subtle humor in the build up to the punchline, you can actually enjoy it. Thanks!

His mommy too?

EWWWW!!

You the man!!!

Damn Dude you fucked everone but the Dad!!! You are the template for all of us fucked over losers to follow!!! AWESOME!!!

Good story

Didn't read comments past the 3-4 below story, all of which were favorable. I know what the others said anyway. White trash is so predictable.

4

Keep writing

Pervert # 5

Im only giving you a 5 cuz you drilled his mom. Thats freaky sick. Wait a 5 is the best you can get. You must have done a great job on mom. LOL

Psychopath?? NO NO

He was careful to avoid major follow up issues every where he went - no lasting impact that was not positive on the women he used (yes he did use them no argument) BUT it was all clearly aimed at the primary user - the boss

He did what he set out to do in spades and made people smile all along the way - immoral? yes - cheating technically? yes - well done? YES

So you cheated on your wife for revenge?

That seems dumb. And risky behavior considering the social diseases out there. And when it was over did screwing those women really make you feel better or "even"? Or did the fact that you cheated multiple times on your wife eat at you? You are a first class putz!

How can this be revenge?

The boss's boss, the master manipulator used his position of power/influence, the company's condo, and probably his company expense account to get an employee drunk and take advantage of her. What he did was inferred, but only to one other employee, one that reported to him but had no way to do anything about it. He has probably done it before and is now free to do it again. All the women in his life willingly had sex with a man they knew to be married and wanted to do again. So tell me again, other than cheating in secret on his own wife multiple times, how did your protagonist get revenge against the man who seduced his wife?

Not one of my favorites

Not really one of my favorite stories on this site. If the situation were reversed people would be calling the woman a whore and saying that the punishment did not fit the crime. His wife cheated once with her boss. He set out to fuck all of the women close to the boss in the course of a year. While that manages to humiliate the boss, he is doing to his wife what others have done to her. Take advantage of her trusting nature. To me, he sounds more like an asshole than a hero

Still trying to see the "Revenge" in it!

That was no revenge, really. All he did was have fun and betray his wife several times. I pity his wife and as already stated: Had it been her that behaved this way, everybody would have called her "whore".

Agree with Javmor79

Guy was a dickhead. Wife deserves much better.

Had nothing to do with revenge...

...Husband keeps on cheating on his wife under false pretense,- nothing else.
What does he think her boss would care if he fucked his - the boss´s - family. A guy that fucks around as much as her boss does doesn´t give a damn. He could have ruined her boss financially, but he didn´t. Instead he cheated on his wife again and again, risking to expose her to some severe STD´s and risking her mental health, should she ever discover his doings. Summary: He is a lying cheating and good for nothing piece of sh... His wife, having confessed her one and only mistake almost immediately, deserves a lot better!

I liked it: 5*****

Thanks for writing. tom anon

5 stars

Excellent story. I too liked it. What a revenge story. Keep writing 5 stars

okay......

So where is the revenge ?

Should have had the wife go in to her employers and charge sexual harassment.
The only way to hurt that kind of predator is the loss of his money and power over women.

Pretty weak revenge,

Making the guy pay and get fired would have been better payback. He probably jerked off watching the video.

Eh

Saw it a country mile away. The rendering was tedious with the foreknowledge.

Find girl, bang girl.

Find another girl, bang another girl.

Find another girl, bang another girl.

Tired of the repetition? So am I.

Which is sad, because it is totally bereft of drama and suspense. How about if he does this laundry list, but suddenly he is with Samantha and her mother runs into her!

NOW I care! What is he going to do? How does he defuse this situation? What happens if they tell Clayton mid revenge? How about if these two guys square off? How about if one of these women not only doesn't care, but wants to help?

There are no stakes, no drama, no tension, so I was bored. Wife was pathetically stupid to borderline retardation. I get naïve. Terminally stupid and agreeable? And even THAT would have raised the stakes! Wife is BEGGING her husband to just let this revenge thing go...he adds notch after notch on his bedpost as his marriage goes further and further down the shitter. What is more important to him?

THESE are stakes! This...it's jerk off material. I guess it's well written jerk off material, and I don't say that disparagingly, but it could have been MORE.

The loss of opportunity saddens me.

Dam,

I finished this story, then went to the toilet and puked up my dinner. A puke story.

fun!!!!

Thanks for a fun story

Fun but rather like going to a job

I guess that's what it was to him, the job of getting revenge one woman at a time. It was perfectly targeted. Claire is a bit of a ditz and he knows it. Clayton is a predator that took advantage of her. Jeremy told Claire that she was wrong and held her feet to the fire but in the end it's her nature to be a sap.

Clayton's a different story. He knew exactly what he was doing and deserved the payback. The women seemed to enjoy themselves. Jeremy presented himself as an available sex partner and they all took him up on his offer. The only one hurt was Clayton.

Sure he was cheating but doing it to make things right. I know that doesn't morally balance but in this case I don't care too much, It's the price Claire paid for being gullible. Jeremy didn't rub Claire's face in what he was doing, he just took care of business.

I also knew he was fucking women in Clayton's life. The pace of it was so matter of fact that it became a bit tedious instead of erotic. But it fit with the nature of the story.

Yeah, what was going on was obvious...

but watching Custer head into the valley in Little Big Man is obvious too - doesn't make it any less enjoyable...

And it it's an AWESOME revenge. He doesn't dare to tell ANYONE about the photos or video but he almost HAD to watch the video to be sure it wasn't just a trick... and now every time he sees any of them he'll see that video and know it's because of him that his mother cheated on his father and his sister-in-law on his brother... and he'll know his daughter was used in a revenge plot against him... all of them treated like sluts because of his predatory actions.

It would be like going hunting and finding out you shot a family member you care for.

And what will makes it even better is he'll NEVER know if the video or pictures might be released anyway... especially with a little note about WHY this occurred... I'm sure his family would just LOVE that publicity.