Three's a Circle, Not a Triangle Ch. 01

I can't read your stories at all

The dialogue is atrocious and unrealistic. 0/5

I can't help but read your stories.

Your dialog is so outrageous and so engaging 5/5. BonoVox99 needs to leave this site and go back to reality TV and that church network he came from and leave this site to us moral degenerates it was designed for. I'd like to put that one up for a vote. This is already smoking hot and Randy hasn't even started his perverted antics. I hope my computer doesn't overheat, I may have to get it a water cooler

another 5 star gem that leaves you awaiting more !

reality erotic fiction at it's best SJP has the pulse of the American male in her writings and this one shows the female side of that pulse. Exceptionally well written with perfect grammar and spelling, a true author at "work" - keep the stories coming in all the venues your talent is superb! *****+

Great start

As usual SJP is setting up a great story with many twists and turns. Looking forward to next chapter(s).

Loves lesbians you bet i do. I could watch them in action for hours. A very engaging story with one of your trademark twists Susan. What set out to be a luscious lesbian romp is now poised tantalizingly to possibly implode into another erotic dimension. And i hope Susan gorges herself on Crystal's pussy. I am looking forward to the next instalment with great interest and expectation. As i was reading the story i was thinking about Randy and his daughter Julie having incestuous sex considering Randy had looked his up daughters skirts and down her blouses so often. That would be spectacular.

Part i was written with you renowned captivating style and skill Susan. Very well done. It hit the spot with me.