by pvclook
Loved it. Nice twist adding the other 2 and could really make this interesting. Turned a story that appeared to be coming to the end to one with a million possibilities. Keep up the good work.
Keep going, I love the ideas, more permanent encasement and augmentation please.
Maybe her breasts could be enlarged too.really looking forward to more.
Please continue, it would be so much fun to hear what happens next
Wow it's been forever since you added another chapter. I really hope this isn't the end. Please continue!
Guessing there is no more v.v well that is a shame, thanks for the good read :)
Every day since Ch 24 came out I've checked for 25, guess it's run its course.
This story series is the best i've read. And i've read more than a few. It is my first comment tho.
It is well written and captivating, and crazy funny. I realy hope for more of this story, and even other stories from you.
I've reread this story many times now, i keep wishing for an update and I do hope its coming soon. It's a well written piece and a very very good read
I read a few i recent time. But none were so well written as this one.
Keep on writing sequels to this story.
Is it safe to say that this storyline is dead? Too bad, I was interested in seeing where it was going. Don't leave us hanging.
It has been a year, I really want to know what happens next...please??
still waiting for new chapters, hope you are doing ok and your health is ok and that it's just life throwing you curve balls
Hello,
After reading this story, I'd very much like to continue it. I also, as a separate request, would like it if I could edit the existing chapters. For 1-23, I'd mostly just like to do some grammatical touching up as well as change the narrative perspective to third person, though my ideas for a continuation did require that I rewrite about half of chapter 24.
Pretty much, to summarize the changes, instead of Susan getting two new slaves, she twists the knife, so to speak, by forcing Perry to watch as Ann is stolen from him by Mary. Mary's delusion is deepened so that Susan can have Daddy "leave Mary for cheating". Mary and Ann's sexual escapades are actually in the half written chapter 25.
Please contact me one way or the other. I have the Chapter 24 edits ready if you would like to read them, and should have 25 done in a few days.
Ningyou Macher