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Strangers in Paradise Ch. 03

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by erOzica10/21/15

Mmmm you are very good!

Loved all three with a great ending climax :)
I always find it amazing that a woman can have these fantasies. More amazing even is that she can write it down in such a way that makes you want to be there with her and please her the way she wants.
Excellent work! Beautiful mind!
5*

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by hadruprider11/20/16

Hot stuff!

I really liked this. I like the slow build-up, how you make the reader wait. Just hints in chapter 1, then the daydreaming fantasising in chapter 2, then finally the full-on explicit real thing in chapter 3, with some nice details that make it seem realistic. 5 stars.

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