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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nice-5

that you can relate to various sexual appetites, I liked your poem but I would have wanted a little more exuberance or detail as to what bottom was feeling or thinking, but perhaps the bottom is demure and not one who vocalizes, not a criticism at all but illustrating a preference on my part. Your volume of poetry this week is not excessive but welcomed for its variety and quality; I suppose it is time to say thank you!

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