Earning My "A"

NICE

Very good. I liked it. More please. And putting it in this category rather than 'Loving Wives' seems to have kept some of the trolls at bay.
MichaelG

Authentic

The emotions you express are truly authentic - and very nicely translated into words. Bravo!

Good story.

Well written and very erotic. Let the "Victorians" stew in their own antiquated hypocritcal and moralistic juices. Live, laugh and love! :-)

Very well written to say the least but the so-called trolls are right, adultery is not romantic. But you won't get a 1 from me because I do think thew writing was solid...the characters however are morally bankrupt.

Earning your "A"?

More like "A+"!

More like "F"

Where's the romance?

I Get It

I get the emotions of your characters, and the romance of this story. What you left out was the long Internet seduction, and the ecstasy of having a fantasy turned into reality even BETTER than it was when you played it over in your head on those cold, lonely nights.

And no, an adulterous romance is NOT an oxymoron!

so sexy

I loved this story - sexy, sweet, a little kinky, and very human and real. Thanks for writing!

Very well done

I clearly see the backstory of internet seduction and this tale being the culmination of not just sexual fantasies but romance and falling in love. Good detail, moves along briskly and takes us to fun places.